The diagram below shows the process of producing paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The

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shows how paper is produced.

Overall

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, the process is made

by

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up of

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9 periods, from the trees in

the

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apply

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nature to the chemicals and

finally

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to the factory.

First,

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cutting the trees down and getting logs,

then

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logs

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the logs

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are transported to a mill.

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this

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, logs are

chooped

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into small pieces before

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chips are boiled with water and chemicals.

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the mixture is filtered to remove impurities. The liquid is drained

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the pulp is spread into thin sheets. The sheets are pressed and dried, and

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finally

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the paper is rolled into large rolls.