The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

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The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.
The bar chart displays the
number
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of male and female
smokers
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in the UK from 2011 to 2021.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
smokers
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among both sexes decreased throughout the years,
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while
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2011
recorded
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the highest
number
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of
smokers
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. The
figure
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for male
smokers
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in the UK consistently outnumbered that of female
smokers
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over the period. In 2011, there were just over 4
million
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male
smokers
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and approximately 3.8
million
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female
smokers
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. These figures
then
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dropped significantly in 2012 to 2.75
million
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and under 2
million
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, respectively. After falling to 2.5
million
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, male
smokers
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then
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increased minimally by 0.5
million
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to 3
million
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in 2015, which was almost three times the
figure
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for females. The
figure
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for male
smokers
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remained relatively stable from 2016 to 2018 at around 2.5 and 2.6
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,
while
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the
figure
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for female
smokers
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fluctuated between 1
million
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and approximately 1.75
million
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. From 2019 onwards, there was a steady decline in male
smokers
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from around 2.75
million
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to 1.25
million
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in 2021.
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, the female
figure
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gradually fell to 0.75
million
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, which was the lowest
number
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of all
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the data
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, smokers, figure, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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