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The graphs below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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The graphs below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line chart illustrates the records and numbers of shops that closed and opened
in
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from
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 2011
until
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to
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 2018
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, it's clear from the graph that the highest openings and
closures
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figuers was
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figures were
 in 2011 and
2013
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2013,
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 respectively.
According to
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 what is shown,
In
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in
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 2011 the openings
figuers
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figures
 recorded 9000
which
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, which
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 was the highest among all years
,
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;
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however
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, it decreased to 4000 in 2012
and
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, and
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then
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 it rose to 5000 and kept rising in 2014 to approximately 6100
, after
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. After
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that
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that,
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 it got back to 4000 in 2015
same
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, the same
 as 2012, and
remain
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remained
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 stable in 2016. In
2017
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2017,
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 it rose a little bit to around 4100
but
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apply
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,
it
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but it
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 got down to 3000 in 2018. In terms of
closures
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, in 2011
by
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,
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 the recording
it
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apply
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was about 6100, and it declined to 6000 in 2012, and went up to 7000 in 2013
which
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, which
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 was the highest
figuers
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figures
 for
closures
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, and again it went down to 6400 and continued to
decreasing
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decrease
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 to almost 600
and
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, and
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 that was the lowest. After that
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closures
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, closures
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 of shops had
suprising rose
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surprisingly risen
 to 5100 in 2016, and it was similar
to
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in
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 2017 and 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words closures with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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