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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22

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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22
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 from Idia who
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 at various universities in the United Kingdom in 2020/2021 and 2021/2022.
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, all universities represented
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a gradual
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 increase in
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. Coventry University recorded the largest numerical value,
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 Sheffield University recorded the highest per cent growth. Coventry University’s intake more than doubled, rising from 2,390 to 5,290.
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 was an increase of 2,900
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, or 121.3%. Greenwich
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 grew considerably, from 2,455 to 4,540, which was a rise of 2,085
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, or 84.9%. Sheffield started from the lowest base of just 815
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, but its figure nearly tripled to 2,345, the biggest proportional rise at 187.7%. The remaining universities grew more modestly. BPP University had the highest figure in 2020/21, at 3,505, yet its growth of 1,640
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, or 46.8%, was the smallest in percentage terms. Anglia Ruskin rose by 1,340 to reach 3,265, a gain of 69.6%. Leicester’s numbers roughly doubled from 1,175 to 2,390, an increase of 103.4%,
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 its rise of 1,215
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 was the smallest in numerical terms.

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