The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how soft cheese is made, showing the different stages involved in the

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, it highlights the step-by-step transformation involved from the initial phase to the final outcome.

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, the

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consists of five main stages, beginning with mixing water and milk and ending with converting the liquid material to

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thick liquid. It is a linear

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, in which the materials go through several

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before the materials

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ready to be sold.

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of the

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, the water and milk are mixed before the mixing result

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cooled for two

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this

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, a salt is added to the material. After that, the material is put in the fermentation for around 6

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at 35 degrees. In the following stage, the material is heated for eight

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at 100 degrees until it evaporates. After that, the material is filtered to be soft. The material is

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cooling

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for six

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at 5 degrees. Meanwhile,

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material is filtered again to waste water.

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, the material is put in the machine to convert the liquid material to thick liquid

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cheese is ready to

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completing the

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