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Indian kid lit is tackling difficult questions of gender, disability, sickness and death

I wondered how children deal with these books which make me so sad. A little bit of reading on Samina Mishra led me to a wonderful essay (‘Why we shouldn’t shield children from darkness’) by an award-winning children’s author, Matt de la Peña, who says, “Maybe instead of anxiously trying to protect our children from every little hurt and heartache, our job is to simply support them through such experiences. To talk to them. To hold them.” Because they undergo the same experience as adults, but unlike adults, cannot process them.
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Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvanatages

These days fast food is more accessible much more than before, this improvement brings both benefits and detriments. However which one is greater than the other?
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Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One can not deny that raising children is no easy task. To this day, people argue on whether or not it is better for kids to grow up in the city or countryside.
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Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion?

I don't know cats rule ok OK say no oof.Cats rule. that makes you happy if no cats rule.You must like these cats they are cute.You need this as cats are cute and rule OK I LOVE CATS.Cats rule ok OK say no oof.Cats rule. that makes you happy if no cats rule.You must like cats are cute.You need this as cats are cute and rule OK I LOVE CATS.I coped and past cats are cute and rule the world.
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The best way to help children to learn to cooperate is through playing team sports at school. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

admittedly, I agree with those who claim that playing team sports, such as basketball and football, can make students understand the importance of work closerly together with each other to win a game. However, for pupils who are not good at physical movements or dislike sports, the methods will be not only less efficient for them. If other children do not want to team up with them, they might feel isolated and excluded, which will hurt their feelings.
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Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Reading is a common way for people to increase their knowledge capacity. Some people think that there is a positive correlation between the number of books they have read and the skills of learning language and imagination, compare with people who enjoy more on watching TV. Personally, I think their view is over generalized, the content from TV series can also help people to gain more knowledge as well.
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Some people think the subjects that students study at university should be decided by the government. Others, however, believe that university students should be able to choose their own subjects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Opponents of government control respond that students' psychological health is in fact the most damaging of the idea. They point out that if the government makes students studying designated subjects compulsory, it might hurt students' mental health. As a result, some students are suffering from psychological illnesses, such as depressive disorder. Some even have suicide tendencies which might lead to irreparable consequences. According to statistics from the Education Bureau of Anhui Province, there are one to two university students commit suicide on the daily basis in Anhui Province alone.
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Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most the society believed exploring nature and travelling is the best to experience and some refuse. At some point , depending on the society and you're perspective of this world. For ,instance society who work in United State can see some executed opportunities and some think high a risk. In the world, two types of humanity first one is an explorer and some prefer to work traditionally. Travelling give lots of new unexpected things and society will not in thought.
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all cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric car should replace them. Do you agree or disagree ?

The housing issue has always been a pressing one. Many people keep on preferring to live in a traditional house, while others in modern apartment buildings. I believe life in a flat is more advantageous due to the fact that this type of accomadation offers better economic and social opportunities.
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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building?Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

The accommodation is one of the most important questions for everybody. While some people think that living in a house is the best option, others think a flat is the most reasonable option. In my opinion there are strong arguments on both sides.
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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Role and the responsibility of the Government towards different sectors are becoming an increasingly important topic among the citizens and has also gained much more scholarly attention. Especially in recent past years. Although, the effectiveness of the topic is debatable. Some people believe, that the Government is only responsible for economic prosperity, while, others hold the view, that maintaining the right balance and taking care of other areas are equally important. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why the latter proposition has several strong elements that deserve attention.
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The food travels thousand of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages ?

These days, our source of nutrition comes along the other side of the world. Some of them think that it is better than eat locally produced foods both environmentally and economically.
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In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?

In recent decades, we may have discovered that there are rarer juvenile people who pay attention to classical music and fewer youngsters who want to be music performers. It seems to me that the reason could be advancement of modern professions and I will depict it with relevant convictions in the following paragraphs.
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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

On the other hand, some people think that their gains are unfair. Although many job’s(jobs) are to be many challenging such as doctor, engineer or architectır , they don’t earn enough money(the bill) to improve their life. for instance, to earn the money(bill) Ronaldo earned lots of doctors who should work for many years. this is injustice.
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Getting promotions is one of the biggest drives for people to apply themselves and work hard in the modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

The map illustrates the alters that have settled down at West Park Middle School since its creation in 1950. According to the second map in 1980, can be seen the disappearance of the houses and farmland. A car park, a science block were built in houses. We can see that the car park has been expanded instead in 2010 years. The playground and the main building of the school have not changed in 3 years.
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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree? (Not yet complete)

Studying art has been mistaken that it's merely necessary for those who contemplate becoming artists. However, it may serve the function of stimulating people to have other abilities to study other academic subjects. Thus, I agree with the given statement for two reasons as being more competitive and being effective in study.
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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, plenty of movies is out on some channels in our country that influence the majority of crowds to view, causing people to be unwilling to work and avoid meeting other friends. I strongly agree with the statement.
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More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays many students are deciding to study their higher education indifferent a different societies. There are more advantages to studying in other regions.
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With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?

Eating healthy, such as vegetables and fruits, is a more efficient way of losing weight. Studies have recently shown that people consuming balanced food are having better results than adults practicing loads of sports.
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Individuals can do nothing to help improve the environment. Only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is widely believed that only authorities and big enterprises have a significant effect on the improvement of the environment while single residents are less contribution. In my opinion, I total agree with this point of view as only the goverment can make policies while big companies can provide finance to help improve our environment.
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