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Smacking children is the best form of discipline to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Discipline is crucial to be maintained by the children. Some people opine that physical punishment is helpful in teaching children how to live a disciplined life whilst others have contrast viewpoint. Although this may lead to better organised lifestyle, I believe children become stubborn and mentally weak due to smacking.
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I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey.

Dear Sir / Madam, I, SYED HADI ALI holding passport number KX1801313 would like to travel to Turkey for tourism purpose for 9 days, as I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey.
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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the company encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? What is your opinion on that? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

It is generally seen that both of the genders are considered equal in every aspect of life. Whilst most of the office jobs are occupied by males only. It is always be a doubt whether females should be given this opportunity too. However this shows the male dominant society, the companies should have to promote more jobs for women as well. This essay will highlight this statement.
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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

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Some people say young people should be completely free to choose their future job but others think young people must be more realistic in their choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A section of society often argued that young generation should have complete freedom to select their future career. However, some experts proposed that youngsters must use a practical approach while building a career. In my opinion, if we provide full support to youth persons in selecting their career then they can achieve a tremendous success in their field. This essay will intend to analyse both aspects in detail with relevant examples.
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Some people suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this .

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Some people believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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tourism is an ever growing industry What benefits do you think tourism bring to individuals and society

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music plays a vital role in our country. How much has music influenced the way we think today? What do you think is key role of music in nowadays world.

Music has a history, it started from the stone age and still, it plays a vital role in human lifestyle. Around the world, music has been appreciated and being part of a life, particularly in my country. It has a large influence, attraction and ability to bring people to the ambience at the mood of music.
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I hold a B.Sc. Biochemistry (third class) and a Postgraduate Diploma in Social Work from the Institute of Social Work of Nigeria. I have been working as a Social Worker in an Orphanage and Maternity Home since 2010. I want to further my education in Social Work. What are my chances of getting admitted into your institution?

I hold a B.Sc. Biochemistry (third class) and a Postgraduate Diploma in Social Work from the Institute of Social Work of Nigeria. I have been working as a Social Worker in an Orphanage and Maternity Home since 2010. I want to further my education in Social Work. What are my chances of getting admitted into your institution?
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A 4-week holiday a year can make employees do better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Vacations are a paramount requirement for everybody's life. Taking four weeks off from work could be a better alternative for workers or may lead to destruction in performance. I agree with the statement and this essay would elucidate the importance of holidays in terms of freedom from the frustration and exhaustion, fresher and refill the energy for achieving the goals of the ompany.
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Children from age 7-11 now spend more time watching television and/or playing vedio games than before. What are the effects of this on children, families and society? What are the possible solutions to this problems?

In the current scenario, it has been observed that juveniles of the age group 7-11 invest their maximum time in enjoying television programs or video games in comparison to past time. As a consequence, the offsprings are not only becoming obese but also they are lacking behind in personality development due to less exposure with the family and the society. To mitigate these major issues parents should fix the time period of electronic entertainment and schools should develop stringlent law so that students can engage in outdoor sports.
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Some people think that renewable energy sources like solar and wind power should replace fossil fuels such as coal and gas as soon as possible. Others think we should continue to use fossil fuels while it is still cheap to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals think that wind power and solar energy should be used as compared to coal and gas, but other persons believe that need to continue the use of fossil fuels because they are not costly. In my opinion, humans should use renewable sources because these are not polluting the environment, secondly solar and wind power are the sources which are free of cost and highly available.
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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Sania Sharma reads in class III. She goes to school by bus. Her mother and father are both working. Generally her father Mr. Anil Sharma drops her at the bus stop every day. One day her father woke up late. Her father could not drop her at the bus stand. So she was late to school. When she entered the class, her teacher said, "Why are you late Sania Sharma?" Sania said, "Madam, I missed my bus".
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Modernisation has revolutionised the way we consume media. It has opened doors for children to watch content of any age groups with much ease. Owing to this, there has been a rising concern among parents about its detrimental effect on a child's behaviour especially by the violent parts of the content. I opine that, while it can be deemed harmful to view such content at an early age, measures can be taken to prevent it.
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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It goes without saying that Museums are one of the essential parts of our world. Which are very useful for presenting all the historical objects. There are some museums which provide free entry, while others have some entry fees. Although, it has some pros but also have few cons too which i would like to explicate in the paragraphs to come.
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nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?

when we sleep then it relax the mind and body of an individual,but these days people's sleep patterns have been changing because of the stress and anxiety.There are numerous reasons behind this and various solutions will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
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Some people think that instead of preventing the climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Climate plays important role in our day to day life.Many believe that instead of taking precautions against climate change they should find a option to live with it.I completely deny the above statement because climate change causes several natural disasters like global warming and uneven weather.
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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that few individuals believe youngsters should get married before they turn 30. However, not all the effects of this phenomenon have been positive, although there are certainly some advantages. In th essay below, I will discuss both sides and will explicate my stand for getting married after 30 years of age with examples.
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Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
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