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Caring for children is important for the society. Do you think parents should take up a childcare training course? Give reasons and relevant examples to support your ideas

Ever since the history of mankind, childcare is indispensable in order to bring about a bright future. However, nowadays, there has been stigmata that parents should undergo a childcare course in order to provide the best care possible. In my perspectives, I do not concur with this fact that parents must be trained and they should have their own alternatives.
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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

In the high tech era, exercise is playing a vital role among the age of people. Without a training, people can't achieve goals in life. People are becoming health conscious these days. Although all over the world of people do the task, yet working people have not taken drill, they have health threads as a result. The upcoming paragraphs will not only examine the why working people don't get enough activity, but also how can solve this issues.
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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere

Humans are best known for expressing emotions, one of it is Art. Arts could be of various forms like music, painting, sculptures, learning languages.In present-day
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook)have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society?To what extent do you agree?

In the current world, The usage of technology is constantly on the rise.For instance, social website like Facebook, WhatsApp, Linkedin, etc. which has had a negative impact on one's individuality as well as on Society. I support this statement which states that social site had a false impact on people.Analysing the advantages and disadvantages of a networking site.
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In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of extreme or dangerous sports?

I'm going to discuss regarding the dangerous sports in terms of advantages and disadvantages. First of all I will start with the disadvantages its very cretical when it comes to the children who watch this kinds of sport which might make them very aggressive however it's entertaining all generations from 10 years up 60 years.
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In some countries people who visit art galleries are reducing. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved?

In many nations, people display artefacts, that are unique, in the galleries. However, the number of people visiting such places is decreasing rapidly. This essay will further discuss the causes and provide solutions to bring the audience back.
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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

At the outset of the new millennium,our society is polarised into two groups regarding equal among the nations.Myriads of people suggest that offsprings make decisions in which they involve society and others believe that children to make decisions for themselves instead of decision which affect the neighbours.IN this essay, we would elucidate both the notions along with my opinion.
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Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Physical and psychological illnesses are both enfeebling. However, mental disorders are not as evident as physical disorders. This essay will discuss why I agree entirely with this statement.
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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Several languages extincts regularly. Even though many people have a belief that it is not important as it is easier to live a life with fewer languages; however, in my opinion the languages that are spoken all around the globe are a real treasure to look deep into the history of human beings. No matter what the lingua france of a person is, it always tells about the lineage of the person. Apart from this, almost all the languages have the capability to express the sentiments.
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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Nowdays, our social life is dealing to tackle loads of stress. To reduce what we have been facing, we are fond of doing things on our own as a hobby including shopping. There is nothing that makes us feel as great as spending money also known as shopping. When I go shopping, it makes me forget what I am going through in my daily life and relieve. I like this kind of feeling. It is like that I was back to my childhood. However, I sometimes hate on me for not being able to buy all I want.
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At present , the media affects the people's lively significantly.What impact does this have on society ? Is it a negative or positive development?

Nowadays , the media impact the men and women's lifestyle. This essay totally agrees that it's a positive trend because it provides the awareness to the society if any frauds,unlawful activities.
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Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give

Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and givepractice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give
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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I agree with this statement, because problems in life are often associated with a small amount of money. Children from poor families saw their parents solve these problems. Children from poor families are accustomed to rely on their strength in competition. Public schools and scholarships provide the best types of education, regardless of the wealth of the parents in proportion to the child's abilities. You need to be not just rich but very smart so that the money does not harm the child.
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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

Art how school subject, could be much useful in education, it should be have the same significance as Mathematics or Science or English, therefore, Art classes should be considered as subjects in high school. I think that activities with there could be develop creativity are highly important for all life skills, nevertheless I think that, at a certain moment in life, a person should choosing if art could be a profession or a hobby, therefore, it would be
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Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do you advantages of new development outweigh the disadvantages?

As technology keeps on evolving, businesses have to keep up with it through mostly through the use of online meetings and trainings.
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Some people believe that we succeed in sport because of our inborn talent. Others argue that continuous working on oneself is a key to success. What do you think?

Success in sports is indeed an inborn talent,but dedication to learning the sport you want by working on oneself can lead to success. So I agree that working on oneself is key to success.Also in the sense that even those with talent need to work onself to come out best.
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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, is it a good or bad thing? Discuss tour opinion.

To buy new things in life gives happier and buy for another person gives satisfaction that can be give me smile on my face
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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

Adventurous activities like hang-gliding to mountain climbing are becoming common these days. People are bored of monotonous life and hence for a change they end up in these life threatening activities. This trend seems to be good as long as they take precautionary measures to prevent any major accidents.
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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

Nowadays, tourism is most booming sector across the globe. It also plays a vital role while deciding the economic growth of the country. However, still many people believe that tourism is not a good thing for their country. My opinion slightly differs, as in my opinion tourism is a boon for any country.
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What are major achievements at your job positin at Centre for social work?

One of the achievements was when I have been engaged as Coordinator of an intersectoral team under the project "Improvement of inter-sectoral cooperation in the protection of children from violence." The project was implemented by the Center for Children's Rights in partnership with the UNICEF office in Belgrade. The project lasted from December 2016 to December 2018.
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