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Why there is a new year and why do we celebrate it

Some people ask why there is a new year and why do we celebrate it. Yes it is a good thought and in my thinking way there is a new year to forget all the unnecessary things and stay free of them, otherwise we will have questions in the whole life. But I know there are questions in the whole life but we should stay happy even one day. They celebrate it because of their happiness. They make sweet meats and do all the things they can do to be happy. I too love the new year.
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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.

People are increasingly overweighted in recent time. What factors do you think are responsible.How can this be addressed. The rate at which individuals are predisposed to adding too much fat is on a rise of recent. Several human practice and way of life are the cause: such as our eating habits, exercise pattern, diet, inactivity and also genetics
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Some people argue that there should be a common punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminals who carry it out. On the other hand, others suggest that the comditions under which the criminal commits a crime should be taken into consideration before deciding the punishment. How far do you agree or disagree with the arguments presented ?

Crime and punishment has been a raging debate since the early days of mankind and to easily resolve the issue would be attempt a difficult task. The idea that there should be a common and fixed punishment for a crime for all criminals who carry it out may seem reasonable but i opine against it.
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Smoking cigarette is determinental? Do you agree or disagree?

Firstly, smoking a cigarette inflicts various problems such as health-related issues. The regular usage of such sustenance can affect lungs, and it could also degrade white blood cell. As a result, several chronic issues may prolong due to its consumptions, for example, because of a reduction in a blood cell, which defends nicotine, lungs-cancer may escalate.  Therefore, it is of the private institutions to separate smoking zones. This inclination will not only prevent passive smokers from getting in the area of active-smokers but also save innocent lives.
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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

There are some countries were the school or college going students have a job for themselves. In this essay let us see both the pros and cons of handling a job while a student is still studying.
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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

Nowadays, the number of young adults is larger than the number of older people in some countries. This situation has number of merits and demerits and we will discuss few of them below.
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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

British lawmakers, capping what may be one of the most abysmal starts any British leader has ever endured, on Monday rejected Prime Minister Boris Johnson’s bid to hold a new national election.
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Some individuals believe raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce traffic accidents.

In this 21st century, everyone is using motorbikes and cars.Day by day increasing rate of accident are growing and we should be careful about this.However,some mankinds believe that a minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is should be implemented but, in my opinion there are some other method for controlling it.
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The best way to improve health is by doing exercise. To what extent do you agree?

The benefits of regular workout is hard to ignore. Everyone favour from disciplined gym routine, regardless of age,sex or physical ability. I second that thought as it helps in building healthy lifestyle. This essay will discuss the benefits of exercise and as well the side effects of failing to do so.
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In the recent years, many small shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Shopping malls have become increasingly popular in many nations. Recently, there has been a raise in the closure of many small-scale businesses as a result of clients traveling to bigger retail centres to purchase goods. In my opinion, this is a negative tendency, because this will lead to unemployment as well as unrest in the society.
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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Some people argue that prisoners are committing a crime again, even though they have been sentenced. I consider there are several solutions which are able to improve it.
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Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media and others believe opposite.

In today's cutting-edge, social media is one of the most important tool on which people shares their views and ideas with a logical situation and which is important for the country. Whilst, other people believe opposite to this statement. I agree with these statement and the reasons of my inclination are articulated in the following paragraph.
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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.

Allocation of money into arts is considered as a waste by some people, who believe it can be better allocated elsewhere. In my opinion, I believe there needs to be a balance between the allocation of funds into arts and other sectors based on the socio economic condition of the country.
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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Competition in working place is upward trend in these days thuse, employers work hard even though they get sick. Mainly, demand of jobs, and commitment of employee responsibilities and mental pressure consequently lead employees to go to job even they are sick but infected person would have more detrimental effects.
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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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What are some of the factors in modern society that causes this stress and how we can reduce it?

Stress is becoming widely spread all over the world, causing people to suffer from it and there are many factors in our modern life that are responsible for this. But there are some ways of reducing the amount of effects it has on us.
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A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The essence of formal education where a teacher engages the student cannot not be overemphasized.Students who practice or study without the help of professional tutors will find it difficult to understand it grasp a better knowledge of English Language.There are rules that most be adhered to,and such rules is best formulated and taught by certified English language professionals.On the other hand, students who are tutored in formal professional environment are likely to succeed than their c...
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Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

With the development in learning sector, English language catches more attention than local languages in the schools. Due to the attention, some people think that if local languages are not taught it will be dying out in nearest future. According to my point of view to learn english is mandatory in the school it will not affects the local languages use.
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others , however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Many hold the opinions that the number of sport aminity needs to exceeded for improvement of public health while others disagree this viewpoint and feel that other ways should be created. There are both sides of this statement in this essay and I will discuss them and give valuable examples.
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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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