IELTS Writing Samples Band 0.5. Page 25

IELTS Writing Samples Band 0.5

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Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from TV as Well as from international sports competition.what is your opinion ?

It is an Irrefutably fact that violence sports are deleterious for the society.It is believed by some folks that sports including violence like boxing and martial arts should be prohibited from television and international sports.I vehemently agree with the notion and ideas to strengthen my viewpoints are discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in country's police and military forces, such as army, while others think that women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that women are equal to men in all fields such as Army, military and other professionals, their contribution towards economic and social growth of a country is important, while others believe that women cannot play the same role as men.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic

These days, tourists visits places with difficult conditions such as the Sahara desert and Antarctic more frequently than in the past. Travelling provides people with different experiences which explains why this kind of visit is possible. However, this essay will discuss the advantages and challenges in visiting these places.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages.

It is obvious that more Brits enjoyed cinemas in a theatre than Australians did between 1976 and 2005. In 1975, over 100 million British watched movies in halls while this was just around 30 million in Australia. With some fluctuations, Australian movie-goers' number reached over 80 million after 3 decades. On the contrary, British cinema attendees dropped from 1977 to 1984, but afterwards steadily went up with some minor vacillations. After 30 years, almost 160 million British went to cinema halls- almost double than that of Australians.

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Some people say that history is one of the most important school subjects. Others people think that in today's world subject like science and technology are most important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

India is a diverse country. There are many types of cultures and regions which people don't know but only read them from history books but many masses think that history is less important than science and technology.All subjects are equally important for anyone because people can learn many things subject wise. I am going to discuss both views and my own views in next paragraphs.

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Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster and cheaper means of public transport.some others think that there are important factors to take in consideration like (fuel,cost and environment) Discuss both views and give your opinion?

First of all, public transport is going to have a huge impact on reducing global warming. It will also reduce no. of vehicles commuting on the roads and thus in turn will reduce the traffic and make our journey faster and since it is a public transport it is going to be cheaper than any other means of transportation

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Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some ways. Do you agree or disagree.

In the modern world, many people are not good at public speech. In this reason, some people are willing to start the training courses of public performance as soon as possible. The idea of starting these courses from the secondary school is well-welcomed by many people, especially the students are willing to take such kinds of lessons, as in many cases, their future career depends on the skill of public presentation. Personally, I believe that it is a good idea to teach the children from the school at this skill.

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Some people say schools should be responsible to teach young adults to look after their health, others think this is not responsibility of schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health and citizens well being has been matter of global concern. Some believe that schools should be responsible to spread knowledge amongst young adults to take care of their health others believe it is not the school's responsibility. I agree that school should be responsible to engrave health amongst the youth. In the below essay we will discuss with relevant examples.

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The planets populatiom is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight over poulation

Health problems like obesity and diabetes are creating a stress on hospital management system by a number of masses who are overweight. Some consider that the best way to tackle with the situation is to introduce more subject based on sports and exercise in school curriculum. I am completely agree with the statement as young children will be aware of their health during growing stage of life

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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is irrefutable that people follow the latest fashion and choose their clothes as well as hair styles according to the modern fashion, in many nation in the would. However, this eassy will discuss about the causes of this trend in the first paragraph and according to me it is a negative development.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

In the modern world, although many school pupils are concentrating on the all subject in order to take high marks, others feel that focusing on particular subjects which they are good at or they find the most interesting is beneficial, as they can use their knowledge in the future. Personally, I believe that students should focus on certain subjects because they can develop these spheres in the future.

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Some people argue that technological invention such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive.Do you agree or disagree?

Mobile phone is one of the major invention of recent decades that have connected us with everyone across the globe. I completely disagree, that phones have eaten up social time of an individual, as they remains connected to their friends and family through various voice and video calling applications as well as it is upon a user to utilise it wisely.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will soon be no role for the teacher in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In teaching systems, since electrical devices such as computers, which are common these days, enable students to have access to the Internet. Many people think that teachers will not be needed in the near future at school. In my opinion, teachers are irreplaceable due to the fact that they can find solutions to many propblems which cannot be tacked by computers.

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Many historical sites and museums are mainly visited by tourists and nit local people. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to attract more locals to those sites?

Museums and historical sites have always been a staple place to visit. But in recent years most of the visitors are foreigners not local community. This essay will discuss the prominent reasons for this including high entry fee and lack of new developments and also put forward some solutions to mitigate this.

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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster . Do you agree

In the modern world, many people believe that cultural diversity can motivate public members to collaborate with other members of society, and it can lead to develop faster. The another motivetional factor for quick development is nationalities. Due to diverse opinions and experiences, the greatest number of burning issues of society may find its solution. Personally, I believe that cooperation between the two people, whose cultural background is different from each other, can find the point of compromise for the further development.

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In some cities, there are few controls on the design, construction of homes, office buildings & owners can decide on styles of houses. Do advantages on this ouweigh its drawbacks?

It is observed in few cities that property owners are given an opportunity to style it as per their requirements. In my opinion, this trend attracts more disadvantages as civil planning of the town gets disturbed. Also, it can lead to unequal distribution of space for everyone leading to mutual conflicts.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting strain on health care system in an effort to deal with health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the schools curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity has become a concern for reasonable amount of population across the world. Local governments are struggling in rendering effective healthcare services to local citizens due to the growing number of overweights. To overcome this, few perceive introducing physical activities in schools would be beneficial. In my opinion, obesity can happen across all age groups, hence it is important to think of a solution that is suitable for everyone.

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Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I don't think I agree with the sentence bellow. People should not be encouraged to do vocatinal training if it's not what they want to do. Many people choose to go to university for academic study because they want to get a good job. They will be qualified workers too, not less than electricians or plumbers.

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Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modern era, teenagers are investing most of their precious time with their mates rather than parents. This is because of their age nature, at the time of teen they want to be show off their things and want to be fashionable. At the same time, they got felling of love and affection for first time so they want it to share that with friends. In my perception family member must give top priority to their offspring at the time of youth because that is the time of career development.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

Technology has a great impact the mode of communication. Due to the advancement in technology the mode of communication between people has changed a lot. This essay will discuss how technology affected the types of relationships people make and provide evidence as to why is a good development.

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