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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say that children in these families benefit from the additional income, other feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give own opinion.

An increasing number of families believe that children will be benefited from extra earnings, so necessitate both the parents to go out and work, while others think children need parents support at home. In my belief, children required parents' presence more than financial aid. Both the arguments/ aspects will be discussed below.
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Because of the progress and the proliferation of the malls and supermarkets in a few nations, it has become an impossible task for startups and local businesses to compete with these giants. According to some people, local communities will die if these local businesses do not survive. I agree with the former statement but I also, agrees that these giant chain stores are a major source of income for numerous families.
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Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.

I fully agree with the above statement. Both the cigarette and the smoke causes multiple damage both to the environment and the general public at large.
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The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A leader is a rolemodel for others and eventually inspire people around him. This position forces a higher responsibility and every decision taken should be well analyzed. Is leadership restricted to older people or young people can, by their turn, be leaders also? In my opinion, age is just a number and to be a great leaders, you need to have the right mindset.
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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?

I have personally seen children growing in the countryside having more friends. Comparatively, children in big cities get exposed to a wide variety of cultures, opportunities, resources to succeed in life.
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Some people believe that entertainment such as film star pop musicians or sports star are paid to much money Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of jobs should be highly paid.?

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

It is a very serious problem that crime rates is highly increased specially amoung the young genration .
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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been a recent debate that modern buildings should follow the style of ancient houses in the villages. While some people think that old building styles should be imitated, other persons, including me think that individuals should be allowed to build houses to their taste. The rationale for each view will be discussed below.
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In many countries Women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree ?

I don`t think this is primarily reason for this problem I think lot of reason has been existing that lead to this.
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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Remote working has been increasing due to computers, internet and gadgets which could be accessed everywhere in recent years. In this essay, I intend to discuss some of the positive and negative aspects of this trend.
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In some countries, increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast foods. Therefore, government should impose higher taxes in this kind of food. Do you agree/ disagree.

Fast food covers a huge market in the world. In the last decades the people's life depends on the fast and busy services , this includes fast food. It is argued that fast food should be imposed higher taxes by the government. In my opinion i completely disagree .
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in many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. what do you think are the causes of this?what solutions can you suggest?

25 years ago, 17th of April, I was born as the last child in a family having 2 sons.Although I used to have a great relationship with my brothers, I always felt lonely.This feeling was always with me untill I started my primary school.There was a girl whose name was Sima.She was pretty like me and had that lonely feeling.We accommodated to eachother and after a while I noticed she had become my besty,just like a sister who I did not have.We got along well,even we were named the twins by our teachers.Everything was fascinating and incredible,till her family and her was forced to move their home.
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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The authorities stimulate to establish commercial facilities in a rural area from the crowded city centres. Although many reasons are based on this argument which between benefits or drawbacks, the idea supports that the most factors have consisted of significant benefit about the statement of transferring commercial properties to away from the city.
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Some people believed the arts should receive money from the government and big companies. Other such find spending a luxury and that it would be better if investment were increased in scientific projects.

It is commonly believed that people have differing opinions concerning fundraising problems. While some people argue that the government should invest in scientific projects, others believe that the arts should receive money from the government and big companies. From my perspective, I believe that both arts and other scientific projects are of great importance and cannot be underestimated. Therefore, the arguments surrounding this issue will be examined in this essay.
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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinge upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

First of all, good healthcare should be available to everyone for free. State healthcare should be paid by the government using money from taxes, since an extremely effective tax system has been adopted to levy, for instance , income tax and other taxes on community residents, they expect the government to create funds for a wide range of health services.Nevertheless , everyone has access to the same quality of care and treatment . Since the exorbitant cost of modern medicines and services can be prohibitive in less affluent families without adequate subsidies from health facilities, they can be significantly affected by devastating disruptions.
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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.

Dear Annie,
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With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?

It is undoubtedly true that due to revolution in technology, all geographical boundaries have been melted.Nowadays it is possible to connect in every nook and corner of the world, which was next to impossible in yesteryears.Therefore, I am strongly in favour with this statement and in following paragraphs, I shall delve into the issue and put forth regarding the supporting points.
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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Vehicles using fuel should be eradicated by introducing automatic ones.
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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? Give reasons with relevant examples

A lot of people are of the opinion that with time Machines will be developed to take over works done by man. This essay will extensively discuss My believe regarding robots taking over and backing it up by citing Numerous example.
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