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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

The graph shows the underground passengers number in london city from 6:00am to 10:00 pm. As it is observed the highest number of people using underground is between 6:00 am to 8:00 am.
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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing nowadays the government have taken some major at the global level but they only get a few solution why is it so how can this problem be solved

Pollution is directly affected by the climate. Plastics are made influence of environment. So it is banned in many Nations. Though people who responsible for it, They have no idea what type of mistake they have done. However, They made more rules and regulation for the circumstances. For example, Uses of plastic are banned in the market so people just have to use polythene which are not harmful for the environment, but countries owner has to create a major law for reducing pollution and try to control the climate by developing trees.
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Fewer and Fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons, is this positive or negative development?

Nowadays, because of growing technology and the rise of computers, less people undertake handwritten work with pen, pencil or brush. The computer is playing a vital role in replacing orthodox methods of writing. In my opinion, it is a positive development as a lot of trees are axed to produce pencils as well as chemicals are used in large scale to prepare ink for pens. All of these contribute an ecological threat to our environment.
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In some countries, old people are more valued while in some young people are more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every country in the world has their distinct culture and thought process to portray. In some countries, few believe that older people are valued, while few perceive that young lads are given more weightage. In my opinion, it completely depends on how modernised a country is with regards to their culture and technology. Countries that have rational approach are more keen on youths ideologies, while the ones which are orthodox in nature display respect for old people.
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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Government uses its budget for different things such as art, public services, wellfare etc. Some people argue that government should only invest its money in public services instead. I personally think that the insvestments should be made in art and social services equally, and I would like to eleborate my thoughts in this essay with examples about this very controversial topic.
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All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars whould replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

First of all I can say I'm totally agreed with this idea. I can explain why my ideas in this way easily.
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Tourism is an ever growing industry.what benefits it brings to society and individual

Undoubtedly, the tourism industry is co-related to food, communication and transportation,which leads to benefit for individual as well as society as every tourist need this mod for travelling.I will list down the pros of tourism to citizens and person.
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More and more people are relying  on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Sports are the physical activities with different names according to the ways of playing them. Sports are generally liked by almost all the children whether girls or boys. Generally the topic of benefits and importance of sports are argues by the people. And yes, any type of sport is deeply connected with the physical, physiological, mental and intellectual health of the person. It helps in maintaining the physical and mental fitness of the person. Playing sports on daily basis help in developing the mental skills. It also improves the psychological skills of the person playing. It brings motivation, courage, discipline and concentration. Playing sports has been made necessary in the schools for the welfare of the students.
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Some people believe that to be successful in a sport, natural ability is necessary while others think hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The factors behind a victory in sports is debatable. Some people think that born skills are needed for being successful in sport while others believe that practice and hard work is the reason behind the success. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why the hard work and practising are the key factors behind the success.
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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The role of preserving the environment by government and citizen is debatable. Some people believe that government should take care the nature while others think it should be done by citizens. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why citizens are responsible for taking care of nature.
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The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled. While at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that, in the 21st century is competitive era in all over the world. Therefore, youngsters in many countries are unemployed and unskilled. Whereas, at the corresponding, military service are required people. I strongly agree with the idea of having mandatory military service can be bring many benefits to the society. I will support this view with arguments and examples in the following paragraph.
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Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Cell phones and smartphones are widely used by the younger generation. The debate that children should be allowed to use cell phones is an argument that is both agreed and disagreed with many. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
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People often have souring neck and shoulder due to the lack of neck support during commuting. Although neck pillow may be a straightforward solution, it is hard to be carried around. Scarf X is a scarf-like neck pillow. By making more than 30 prototypes, Scarf X can provide better support and it is 86% smaller and 65% lighter than the normal ones. This project is in the final of our school Entrepreneur Days’ competition.

People often have souring neck and shoulder due to the lack of neck support during commuting. Although a neck pillow may be a straightforward solution, it is hard to be carried around. Scarf X is a scarf-like neck pillow. By making more than 30 prototypes, Scarf X can provide better support and it is 86% smaller and 65% lighter than the normal ones. This project is in the final of our school Entrepreneur Days’ competition.
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, due to the rise of E-commerce, traditional shopping methods would be disappear in the future. This essay agrees the fact that online purchasing methods will affect the existence of old shopping methods in future not only because of its convenience over traditional one, but also the price benefits we are getting.
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Nowadays environmental problems are too big for individual countries or people to solve. We have reached the stage where we need cooperation on an international level to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Ecological system is vital for living things and day by day it’s getting more and more polluted that one country or citizen of that nation cannot rectified but its need the collective support from the group of countries of the region to take the corrective action to save the environment for our future generation. This essay agrees that individual countries cannot deal with the environmental threats and need big support from other countries as well. Firstly this essay will discuss the problem associated with the eco system and why individual countries cannot dealt with it. Secondly, what benefits will be draw by cooperating between different nations.
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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree?

A good reason to focus more on helping each other and learning teamwork is that it will improve the chances of a better carrier. This is because people love to be with others who are more friendly and know how to work alongside each other. If a kid gets to learn these soft skills from an early age, they can apply these later in life at the office which can improve the chances of getting promoted.
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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree?

A good reason to focus more on helping each other and learning teamwork is that it will improve the chances of better carried. This is because people love to be with others who are more friendly and know how to work alongside with each other. Therefore, if a kid gets to learn these soft skills from an early age, later in life the chances of promotion will be higher.
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Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that campanies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work because it maintains Equality is the company and it provides safety to employees. Others think that it is unnecessary because employees feel uncomfortable in uniforms when they are at work. I will discuss both views with my opinion.
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Nowadays, we are living in a throw-away society. What are its causes and what are its problems?

IN THE PRESENT ERA, ENUMEROUS THINGS ARE MADE FOR SINGLE USE LIKE PUFFER DISHES, PAPER PLATES AMD SO ON. BECAUSE OF THIS REVOLUTION, SOCIETY BECOME THROW-AWAY. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE PRIME REASONE BEHIND THIS SCENERIO AND SECONDLY, HOW, THROWING AWAY HABIYT OF PEOPLE HAVE NEGATIVE IMPACT ON GOVERNMENT ECONOMY.
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Question: many people believe that zoos should be closed because it is cruel to keep animals locked up. Moreover, zoos do not have positive roles to play in society. Discuss

Animals right advocates are campaigning against keeping animals in zoos as they believe it is a cruel practise and they believe zoos has no positive impact in the society.
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