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Some schools include art in their curriculum to develop creativity of their students. Is it a right approach? Can it have any downsides?

Though modern educational system is concentrated on sciences and technology, there are still efforts to run art classes at some schools. Art as a component of school curriculum is not conceived undoubtedly. There are many debates whether the creativity it evokes in students is measurable with the costs, a school budget spends on it.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Actually music is the most significant part of our modern life.Due to the statistics the music has a great contribution to the people's minds and relaxation. And also it effects to the older people as well as the youngsters to compile the culture of all people. I agree with this statement and outline below.
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Some people think it is a waste of money to establish libraries since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information, do you agree or disagree?

Type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2DM) is a common metabolic disorder which is characterized by hyperglycemia because of insulin resistance (IR) and insulin deficiency. The incidence of T2DM is one of the most steadily exacerbating phenomena worldwide which is increasingly recognized as a serious public health concern 1.
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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is very difficult to say what is best for the future life of children. Parents' money is a tool, they can be used for the benefit of children or to the detriment. If parents have little money, children use the range of services the importance of which was valued by society. It is good to give children good health, a love of sports, a love of work and study, and skills to get along with other people. If the money helps, it’s good.
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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I think both are equally important. And you can not succeed with just one strength. Physical strength is important in sports such as cricket,football,basketball,etc. Although it focuses more on physical strength, mental preparation is required in all the sports, without mentally planning your stratergy one can not get success easily. Other sports such as chess need mental strength and zero physical strength. As we all practise makes us perfect, we need to apply this in both phycial and mental strengths in order to achieve our goals. And it also depends on the sport you choose to play. It can be outdoor and indoor. Outdoor games require more physical than mental strength whereas Indoor games require mental ability to think and no physical strength. I conculde that both the strengths are equally important.
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Do you think the significance of English language as an international language will be lost with globalisation or its significance will increase with globalisation? What is your opinion?

One thing which constantly changes is the change in the environment and the one which continues to expand its boundaries is English.The language plays a major important role to express our feelings and ideas and among them English shines like a diamond.Since, the ideas are evolving and to make all people understand rather using their native tongues, English is preferred all over the world
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Many agricultural lands are being converted into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and the people’s lifestyle? Discuss this situation and provide suggestions to address these issues. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

These days, more and more agricultural lands are being developed as malls and commercial centers. The consequences of this is that, people who farm have less produce to reap but more people would be going out as there will be new places to visit.
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NOWADAYS A LARGE AMOUNT OF ADVERTISING AIMED AT CHILDREN SHOULD BE BANNED BECAUSE OF THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Succinctly put, I do not agree that advertising specifically aimed at children should be banned. Companies are bound by laws to ensure that the contents of their advertisement do not contain illicit contents that will herald a negative effect on the children.
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The key to solving the environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. Agree/disagree?

In the past few years our planet have suffered a huge impact of negligence from its own habitants.
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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree.

Many people think that prison is only way resolve the problem of crime. But, in my opinion, it can not be the way to make people out of the criminal works. So, in this essay we can able to find most of the effective solution to problems of crime.
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In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

I think it is an positive look why because now a days cost of living has been increased dramatically, to cope with the of cost of living people has to earn a lot.
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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved?

Pollution and climatic change are two of the major environmental issues faced by the world today. As everyone is aware about the gravity of the situation, many global decisions have been made to ameliorate the situation, but alternatively, these solutions have not given very positive results. This essay will discuss why these solutions have not turned out to be effective and will propose some solutions to the current problem.
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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.?

The advantage of tourism is that the country can earn money easily. What I mean is that many countries have a massive income thanks to tourism, even if they have no strong domestic industry and techniques. On the other hand, the disadvantage is that tourist places are suffered by crime. There are many pickpockets who always have a target on tourists, so they are likely to lose their belongings.
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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, the main challenge for people is being healthy. Due to change in our lifestyle people are becoming overweight. The main reason of obesity among children is the lifestyle of their parents. Nowadays, both parents work from day to night in order to earn more and more money. They are always in hurry and therefore always buy fast food.
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In many countries people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

There are some countries who are well developed and successful in the world. But when it comes to do thing like thrown away is making a very bad impact on us and on our upcoming generations who dont know what is clause to throw things they will not know how importance things can be for poor people.
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Some individuals feel that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback for employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true technology is interesting for working from home. Some people think that working from home appears to bring many benefit to employees but not the employers. I partially agree with this statement.
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As computer are being used more and more in education, there will soon be no role for the teacher in the classroom.

There is excessive usage of data processing machine in studies. Study related material is available online. That's why very early there is no need of any tutor in the classroom. But partially I am disagree with it.
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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. Do the advantages of this new approach outweigh the disadvantages?

In the past in order to write a research paper or a report, physical presence was necessary to attend the lecture and being tangibly present in the libraries for research. Complete dependency was on the one teacher to teach a certain subject. With the evolution of technology flexibility for a more various age group who could not previously attend schools as they had children and elderly to take care of are able to learn with using a combination of online classes, in class participation through video resource including working parents or parents with children are able to
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Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Education is considered as necessary requirement for the development of the individual. Some people thinks that same number of men and women take admission in university at particular, branch of studies. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this point as subject choice depend on an individual choice.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music is in the only thing in the entire universe which brings people together. People of all ages love music and it makes us relax. It is one of the most beautiful thing that happen with us. I strongly agree with the opinion that it is the best way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
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