IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Does one need some time to spend on leisure activities? Unfortunately, people work for extra hours leaving very little or no time at all for extra activities seems less advantageous.
Criminal activity is becoming virus for the world. With the advent of the technology, some people believe that criminal rate can be reduced. However, I agree with the proposition as it would not only prevent from crimes but also solve it.
Nowadays, student’s behaviours is an issue in schools. In many nations learning institutes have major problems with the student attitudes and behaviours. This essay will discuss certain reasons of this issue and also some ways to tackle it.
Media and its influence on the societies, has grown exponentially with the advance of technology. It had been noticed that media has more tendency to focus on problems and emergencies than positive development. There are specific reasons why media tends to highlight negative events, but in my opinion, it has more drawbacks than benefits.
Acquiring new language skills is by no means easy. New learners might encounter several challenges such as unfamiliar accents or grammar, syntax in the learning process of a foreign linguistic. However, in my opinion, such difficulties can be tackled by a well-rounded education system.
The gradual merging of cultures and economies over the world has led to an increasingly competitive international job market. Recognition of the role [THAT] competitiveness plays in success has permeated most facets of society, and this includes the institutions that prepare students for adulthood. It is agreed [I AGREE THAT] that competitiveness among high school students should be encouraged. The merits of this position will be shown by looking at how a competitive spirit can help train young people to both spot opportunity and cooperate with others.
Marrying couples often aspire to throw lavish wedding receptions with which to celebrate [For Celebrating] their union. However, often these parties carry with them a burden that newlyweds cannot comfortably bear. It is agreed that excessive spending on marriage celebrations can cause issues for new husbands and wives. This will be shown by analyzing how excessive matrimonial ceremonies can encumber newlyweds financially and cause unhealthy competition to show off social and financial status.
It is true that advertising is x well-known method for promotion to increase the sales. x, While some believe that there is no effect of advertising on decision making skills, I agree with those who feel that it has a huge impact on making decisions.
Some would argue that online games are not good for kids. While, other consider that they can be beneficial. Although, video games are benefits young people, but I believe that children adopt this kind of lazy lifestyle and ignore physical activities does deteriorate health.
In the modern era, the advertising world spread all across the streams, and it has been covered each and every corner on the society. Since influence takes a major part in people's purchase, some have argued that the purchase of famous consumer product drive because of the influence of advertising to the actual requirement of the place where they are sold. I strongly agree with this view because advertising creates not only last longing impression in mind but also attract towards the purcha...
It is argued whether doing sports activities helps children become competitive or develop teamwork sense of collaboration. I believe that sports teach them both things, and in this essay, it will be discussed why many sports stimulate the sense of competition or collaboration in children
In all nations of the earth, use of internet has made information readily available to humans through the use of electronic gadgets, mostly without charge. Though there are many benefits such as, a reduction in the cost of purchasing books and a growth in business, however, there are also some disadvantages.
The writer’s view, there is a hot debate over helping to the everybody that needs it to run the universe. However, I disagree with the idea that we should help them at any price. for this purpose, there are different ways.
Employee’s selection is a difficult process these days. Although some people believe that recruiters asking from employers about their hobbies, interests and whether they are married or single is a relevant to a job, others are against of this view. In my view, I agree with the former view and this essay will discuss both of the sides.
It has been noted that in many nations, nowadays, it has become unlawful not to accept a person who apply for a job due to his or her age. In my opinion, it is a positive development as there would be a reduction in the rate of unemployment and an improvement in economic growth.
Nowadays, criminal activities committed by teenagers are on the rise. Some people believe, improving parental techniques in parents is the sole way to curb this growing trend. This essay will discuss why I just partially agree with this statement.
Nowadays, the populations of most countries have grown, and many people live in large cities. However for some people, choosing to live in a large city could be a hard decision, as that has its advantages as well as its disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.
Whether people should be allowed to work after attaining the age of 60 or not, is debatable. It has been suggested by a few people that when people are allowed to work after the age of 60 then this will become problematic. In my opinion, it is necessary for every country to specify that people would not be eligible to work after 60's.
These days, many people have an opportunity to go abroad on business, to obtain seek higher education, or obtain citizenship in a different country. However, some people face challenges such as frequently feeling sad or lonely due to homesickness. However, these issues can be solved by planning appropriate measures before migrating to another country.
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