Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree? Share relevant personal experiences.
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days
men and women both are working full Change to a genitive case
day's
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. Some group of Correct your spelling
expenses
people
encouraging this
habit and asking to devide
their household Correct your spelling
divide
decide
work
between them for better prospects. I am completely agree
with their speech.
Working hard in long day shift and Change the verb form
completely agree
then
spending time
on household work
can make a single person
's life so hactic
in different ways. Correct your spelling
hectic
Firstly
, a person
can be get retired physically easily due to h
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the
work
and then
looking after their children or cooking food, or washing clothes. This
can be even worse if only one person
is looking after all r
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the
work
. For example
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ouse after Add an article
the
work
. Secondly
, this
hard time
can be converted in to
mental stress for the lonely worker due to less sleep, heavy responsibility at Join the words
into
work place
and Correct your spelling
workplace
then
regular work
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the
person
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the
in to
financial issue due to their tired mind. Join the words
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will result into
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fulfil
people
are working so hard to achieve it.
However
, working like
a team and Replace the word
as
divding
all Correct your spelling
dividing
house
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housework
work
can drastically change the life of a family. There are several benifits
of changing Correct your spelling
benefits
this
pattern. The top most
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topmost
people
can shared
the Change the verb form
share
work
and can get quickly free from routine the work
. They can enjoy this
time
with eachother
and can learn new things. It will increase emotions between them and reduce mental stress. In Correct your spelling
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addition
physically
stress is always connected to mental strength. Sharing Change the adverb
physical
work
can also
release their physical body pain. Moreover
, it is said that,
Children are often learning from their parents and with Remove the comma
apply
this
strategyAdd a comma
,
team
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teamwork
work
. Finally
, working together and helping eachother
inside the family can encourage other Correct your spelling
each other
people
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In conclusion, it is good to expect good lifestyle and to achieve Add an article
a
this
, not only require hard work
but also
smart work
and this
only can be achieve
by working together on common works.
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be achieved
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