Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree? Share relevant personal experiences.

In

this

twenty-

first

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people

are moving towards living

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ich lifestyle. To achieve

this

, they are now more dedicated

towards

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their

work

schedule.

In addition

, it is not possible for one

people

in

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urrent competitive market so,

this

days

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men and women both are working full

time

in their professionals to face their

expences

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. Some group of

people

encouraging

this

habit and asking to

devide

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divide

decide

their household

work

between them for better prospects. I

am completely agree

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with their speech. Working hard in long day shift and

then

spending

time

on household

work

can make a single

person

's life so

hactic

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hectic

in different ways.

Firstly

, a

person

can be get retired physically easily due to

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eavy load of office

work

and

then

looking after their children or cooking food, or washing clothes.

This

can be even worse if only one

person

is looking after all

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outine

work

.

For example

, in India, girls are working so hard in

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ffice and

also

taking care of cooking, and cleaning of

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ouse after

work

.

Secondly

,

this

hard

time

can be converted

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mental stress for the lonely worker due to less sleep, heavy responsibility at

work place

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and

then

regular

work

of home can make

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erson so sick mentally. Sometimes it can be eventually converted into more dangerous to their life while driving

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ar or working with flame in

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itchen.

Finally

,

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tressed

person

could be left

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ob or get fired from office and get fall

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financial issue due to their tired mind.

This

will result

into

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, the aim will never get

fullfill

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fulfil

for what

people

are working so hard to achieve it.

However

, working

like

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a team and

divding

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dividing

all

house

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work

can drastically change the life of a family. There are several

benifits

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benefits

of changing

this

pattern. The

top most

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,

people

can

shared

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the

work

and can get quickly free from routine the

work

. They can enjoy

this

time

with

eachother

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each other

and can learn new things. It will increase emotions between them and reduce mental stress. In

additon

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addition

, in one research it is said, the

physically

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stress is always connected to mental strength. Sharing

work

can

also

release their physical body pain.

Moreover

, it is said that

,

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Children are often learning from their parents and with

this

strategy

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parents can teach them the

team

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teamwork

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work

.

Finally

, working together and helping

eachother

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each other

inside the family can encourage other

people

to follow it. By

this

way,

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ouple can contribute indirectly

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a huge part in making

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ood society. In conclusion, it is good to expect good lifestyle and to achieve

this

, not only require hard

work

but

also

smart

work

and

this

only can

be achieve

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by working together on common works.