While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb witness. Consider changing it.
It appears that the phrase best fit does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
The verb says does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
It appears that the singular verb is does not agree with the plural compound subject education, certificate and experience. Consider changing the verb to the plural form.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word looking. Consider adding the preposition.
The word comunication is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
The noun phrase pilot seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase airplane seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The spelling of airplane is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The noun phrase emergency situation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The preposition of after the verb depends may be incorrect. Consider changing it to another preposition.
It appears that the form of the verb experience does not work with is in this sentence.
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Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.