While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal

qualities

, rather than qualifications and

experience

. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples. Nowadays, we are

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how fast growth of numerous industries. Recruiting the best candidate is very difficult for many employers. How they can determinate

this

person is

b

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est fit for

this

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education

, certificate and

experience

is

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more important than personal

qualities

. I think both of these components are important. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why both of these components are important but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that if people will have great

education

and

experience

but not will have social skills how will be looking relation between them and potential clients ? How will be looking

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relation with other team members when will be time to work together . Determination, discipline,

comunication

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skills are important to full team success. To explain another view I can use an example job like

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ilot. For

pilot

is necessary to have

experience

,

education

and

also

have personal

qualities

. Personal

qualities

are important when they have contact with passengers and other team members, but when is some emergency situation personal

qualities

isn't enough. That time, most important is

education

about how

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airplane

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works, how looks procedure when is

e

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mergency situation and big

pilot

experience

. In summary, both components are important depends

of

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jobs . For cardiochirurg more important

is

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experiences

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experience

, for makeup maker and

pilot

experience

and social skills are important.