It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that technological
imprivements
a change for the better; progress in development
improvements
improvement
will eventually lead to a loss
on
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of
traditional culture from different parts of the world, as these two won´t be able to get along together in the future. It is not agreed that traditions are not going to be relevant with the advances of technology, because these
last
ones could even help the cultures to survive. The essay
will
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will, firstly
firstly
, describe how technology may help traditions not to disappear, and
secondly
, explain why some traditions will not get affected by the future innovations. Modern discoveries in informatics, and the
way
people live with technological improvements can complement traditions not to be lost.
This
is because many practices that come from
old days
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the old days
have a higher risk to disappear if they are not spread across the world effectively.
Therefore
, new information systems,
such
as the internet, are a good
way
to keep
this cultues
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these cultures
this cultures
this culture
alive, making it easier for people to learn about them. Even though future changes will categorize a large part of
traditions
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tradition
as "not to be needed in the modern world", some of them will find a
way
to remain relevant.
This
is because cultures
also
have to do with family topics and values, that are
transmited
occurring among members of a family usually by heredity
transmitted
from mouth to mouth from older to younger people for generations. An example for
this
are traditions
such
as different types of food typical
for
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of
a culture, or the
way
people reunite themselves
in
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at
the table to eat all
toghether
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
. In
conlusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, there is no doubt
thatlong
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that long
time cultures can be
destabilitzed
become unstable
destabilized
by technological innovations, but believing that these traditions will all eventually
dissapear
get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappear
is a mistake. The human being has always kept the thing they value in a good place
on
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in
their minds.
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