Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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Many a time applicants are asked to provide personal
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marital status. Some recruiters feel that
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is useful. I agree with that view. In my opinion, personal
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applicant’s personality and
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, whether an
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needs to share personal
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depends on the nature of the
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of a contract
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or a consultant whose service is required for only a short period. Whereas in the case of a permanent
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an
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must know about an applicant’s
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or interests as knowing about a person’s interests can help to understand if they possess leadership skills or if they are a team player. An
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benefit from knowing a potential
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’s marital status.
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, if an
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is looking to hire an air hostess who is supposed to work odd hours and even on weekends, it does not make sense for them to hire a woman with young kids. On the down side, some people insist that employers should not ask for personal
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to discriminate against an
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may decide not to hire an applicant whose religious or political ideologies clash with theirs. To sum it up, I believe that the personal
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is useful for the
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because in most cases it is a very important indicator of a person’s personality and his comfort level with a
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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