Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I think the prices of fuels has increased in the present time because of the
environment
,
Accept space
,
it has
great impact
Suggestion
a great impact
of
fuel
resources. Most people use nowadays cars which bad for the
environment
obviously engine cuts engine cuts pollution. In my own view
.
Accept space
.
I totally agree in order to reduce the world
fuel
consumption is decrease the world's
fuel
resources. People do not care about the
environment
and as long as people using cars
,
Accept space
,
people do not care if the
fuel
has increase or less. In the supermarket they charge the per bag you would have to pay 5p because the
environment
and the majority of people using cars now rather than bicycles or walking or catching buses and catching
train
Suggestion
trains
they use cars
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
it is easier, comfortable
this
plural of "this"
these
are the
adavatage
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantage
of using cars,
however
the
disadvanage
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
are higher cost of
fuel
in your cars and
also
pollute the
environemnt
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. To be able to reduce the prices of
fuel
you need to reduce to go short distances by your car or you would just walk or use cycle is healthier than using a car
therefore
cars have lots of
probelms
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
in air pollution, engine and
eniveronment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
friendly.
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