Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention
around
Suggestion
Around
the world.
Although
the idea of
co-existence
existing peacefully together
coexistence
with
climate
change
appears
pausible
Suggestion
Possibly
Possible
Pausible
, people should find out some feasible solutions to combat
climate
change
instead
Suggestion
Instead
of accepting it in the long run. There are a number of reasons explaining for the co-existence with global warming.
First
, since it is believed that natural disasters are unavoidable, trying to resist them is
hopeless
Suggestion
Hopeless
.
For example
, Japan is particularly susceptible to earthquakes
,
Accept space
,
or some Asian
countries
Suggestion
Countries
get hit the most by typhoons due to their geographical location,
thus
combating
global
Suggestion
Global
warming is in vain.
Second
, the expense of space projects is extremely high
,
Accept space
,
which
discourages
Suggestion
Discourages
people from investing it to prevent
climate
changes. In fact, some people
suggest
Suggestion
Suggest
that government funding should be diverted toward improving the living standard
of
Suggestion
Of
ordinary people in lieu of investing in space projects, which means they accept to live
with
Suggestion
With
global warming.
However
, it’s human’s duty to find out practical approaches to prevent
climate
changes
Suggestion
Changes
because of
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
it's
negative impacts.
First
,
climate
changes
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change
is largely shaped
Suggestion
are largely shaped
by
human’s
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Human’s
activities rather than the nature itself. If people don’s take responsibility for
what
Suggestion
What
they have been doing to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
, natural disasters will get closer to them,
causing
Suggestion
Causing
a big loss
on
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of
human
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as global warming or frequent typhoons,...
Second
,
natural
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Natural
disasters occurring in a long run will wipe out biologic diversity including human
being
Suggestion
Being
.
Therefore
, people need to act now to stop global warming. In conclusion, people should find out other practical approaches to prevent
climate
change
Suggestion
Change
. By considering all substantial effects of
climate
change
on human life, everybody
will
Suggestion
Will
find out the ways as well as be highly aware of protecting environment.

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