Most people believe that stricter punishments should be given for traffic offences. To which extent do you agree or disagree?

The current era is witnessing an increase in different types of transportations in sizes,

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, and engines. Though

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is a sign of great application of technology, traffic has become more worrying than ever, as the number of accidents

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goes up every year.

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, one widespread opinion is that traffic violators should be punished stricter than in the past.

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an opinion. Most vehicle controllers are adolescents or adults, meaning that giving them heavy fines is an effective punishment. Since the majority of those people are

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about finance, warning them by taking their money has a lasting effect on their driving

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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. To illustrate

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, drivers in Vietnam are usually

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for about 300000 VND if they move on the street without turning the light on in the evening, which can cause dangers to passers-by or other drivers.

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way of punishment,

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, is only useful for the short-term since it cannot ensure that those who were fined would never make mistakes again. In the long-term, education has an important role in creating a right mindset for children who will be vehicle controllers in the future. There have been a number of classes about safe driving, which is more beneficial than implementing strict punishments for drivers. Students or children, once have been taught and educated carefully about the dangers of not driving safely, are likely to be cautious when they are allowed to drive a vehicle; in some cases, they even encourage their family members to drive safely, spearing the right mindset of being a good driver. A great example of

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students in Vietnam being shown pictures or videos that

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many accidents on the roads. The students will understand that not having a good

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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and attitude when moving on the street could risk

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of them or themselves

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or their family’s lives. To conclude, using education, not strict punishments, is a more well-advised method

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correcting people’s mindset when riding their vehicles on the street. I agree that punishments are necessary;

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, education is more of a long-term method that has a more lasting effect and is more widespread.