Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For a major proportion of the people, there’s a perspective that the primary reason of
work
is
wages but
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wages, but
there’s a substantial herd who still believe that a mere handsome salary can’t be only
factor
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factored
of satisfaction unless it offers good
work
culture and ambience. So, In
this
essay I would like to portray both the perspectives and
hence
, outline my personal interpretation to it. On one side of the popular belief, for
major chunk
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a major chunk
of the people, it’s quite prevalent dogma that money is the only solution to their existential problems.
Thus
, it creates an urge amongst them to incline towards seeking a job in a company rewarding high
paychecks
. And for
this
, they are ready to compromise with the
work
pressure and take tough call on commitments. Though,
this
negotiates with one’s social
life but
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life, but
can earn great monetary rewards and fulfil materialistic desires. On contrary to it, A significant part of
community
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the community
still go with a feeling that companies providing a better
work
environment transcends the monetary benefits and perks to them.
In addition
, they believe, it enhances the positive attitude and promotes good health. Which in return, creates social balance amongst them. In my judgment, both the perspectives have a fair appeal. But, I would rather choose a job role in a company which promotes balance in income and working as it fosters an amicable rapport between professional and personal life. In conclusion, To lead a healthy lifestyle we need to maintain
good
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a good work
work
-life balance to promote ourselves socially, financially and in sound health.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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