The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates people who consumed the
amount
of Use synonyms
fish
and some distinct kinds of meat in Use synonyms
European
from 1979 to 2004.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
amount
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of
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apply
consumption
of chicken reached the highest point over the period of 25 years, Use synonyms
while
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this
figure Linking Words
of
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for
beef
, lamb and Use synonyms
fish
witnessed a decrease between 1979 and 2004.
In 1979, the figure Use synonyms
of
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for
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consumption
of Correct article usage
the consumption
beef
was the highest in a Use synonyms
European
country, at approximately 220 Use synonyms
grams
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person
per Change preposition
per person
week
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
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amount
of Use synonyms
consumption
of both chicken and lamb Use synonyms
were
lower than that of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
beef
in 1979, at exactly 150 Use synonyms
grams
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person
per Change preposition
per person
week
and about 140 Use synonyms
grams
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person
per Change preposition
per person
week
respectively, Use synonyms
while
the number of people consuming the Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
fish
in 1979 in a Use synonyms
European
country was the lowest only about 65 Use synonyms
grams
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person
per Use synonyms
week
.
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over
a 25 Change preposition
apply
year-period
, the figure Correct your spelling
year period
of
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for
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consumption
of chicken witnessed a dramatic rise to exactly 250 Correct article usage
the consumption
grams
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person
per Change preposition
per person
week
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
the
2004s experienced a sharp drop in the Change preposition
in the
consumption
of both Use synonyms
Beef
and Lamp in a Use synonyms
European
country to over 100 Use synonyms
grams
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person
per Change preposition
per person
week
and approximately 60 Use synonyms
grams
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person
per Change preposition
per person
week
respectively, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
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amount
of people who consumed the Change the quantifier
number
amount
of Use synonyms
fish
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to drop
to the lowest point in 2004, at under 50 Change the verb form
dropped
grams
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person
per Use synonyms
week
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, fish, european, consumption, beef, grams, person, week with synonyms.
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