The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

There is a wild range of
entretainment
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
activities, in their free time people like to go out of the house and recreate. For that, there is necessary to have entertainment venues, that can be divided in three categories: Sports, Theme Parks and Cinemas. Looking at the
first
picture, we can
easy
Suggestion
easily
note that cinemas are the most visited venues, there were more
tan
conjunction used in comparatives
than
1000 visits in 2009, Theme Parks were less visited, like 350 visits
aprox
approximately, approximate
approx
. And sports venues have less tan 200 visits that year.
This
has a strange
conection
a relation between things or events (as in the case of one causing the other or sharing features with it)
connection
with the admission price
ticket
.
cinema
Suggestion
Cinema
, which has more visits, is the one that has the lowest price
in
Suggestion
on
of
the
ticket
, only $15, and
also
have a familiar
ticket
, for 4 people, that costs only $55. Sports have different
tipes
a subdivision of a particular kind of thing
types
of events, that have a range of prices, the lowest is the Cricket Game that costs $24 and the highest is the football game-AFL,
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
is priced at $75. One
ticket
to a Theme Park costs $70 and the family
ticket
costs $210

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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