The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There is a wild range of
entretainment
activities, in their free time people like to go out of the house and recreate. For that, there is necessary to have entertainment venues, that can be divided Correct your spelling
entertainment
in
three categories: Sports, Theme Parks and Cinemas. Looking at the first picture, we can Change the preposition
into
easy
note that cinemas are the most visited venues, there were more Replace the word
easily
tan
1000 Correct your spelling
than
visits
in 2009, Theme Parks were less visited, like 350 visits
aprox
. And sports venues have less Correct your spelling
approx
tan
200 Correct your spelling
than
visits
that year. This
has a strange conection
with the admission price Correct your spelling
connection
ticket
. cinema
, which has more Correct article usage
The cinema
visits
, is the one that has the lowest price in
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apply
the
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apply
ticket
, only $15, and also
have
a familiar Correct subject-verb agreement
has
ticket
, for 4 people, that costs
only $55. Sports have different tipes
of events, that have a range of prices, the lowest is the Cricket Game Correct your spelling
types
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
costs
$24 and the highest is the football game-AFL, wich
is priced at $75. One Correct your spelling
which
ticket
to a Theme Park costs
$70 and the family ticket
costs
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