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We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways however can new technology help maintain our traditions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experiance.

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Technology
 is
developping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
in
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at
a
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an
 unstoppable speed which shows in the number and style of items
such
 as computers, laptops, mobile phones, iPads.... There are many people said that new
technology
 is threatening our traditions all over the world.
However
, the concern is whether new
technology
 can help maintain our beloved traditions in any way. We must admit that new
technology
 is the good
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
 of creativeness. There is a fact that we have many companies, which are in
variety
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varying
 sizes and different parts, try to produce new technological items in each
second
. It might be the commercial require of the international market, it
also
 can be the effort of the scientists. The products aim to be better and better, newer and newer in comparison with the old versions. It means that something old should be
replace
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replaced
 by the new one which is improved from the original.
New
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The new technology
technology
 is based on the old
technology
 while the oldest
technology
 root was from the traditions. Thereby, new
technology
 is using and developing from the traditions, even it raises the tradition to reach a new rank in its progress.
For instance
, we used
hand-writing
written by hand
handwritten
hand-written
handwriting
 letters to keep in touch before the media means appeared. By the time, phones and computers, iPad were invented along side with the Internet explosion. On the one hand, people feel that it's easier to connect with others, not only our
relatives but
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relatives, but
also
 our friends who we have never met before.
On the other hand
, some people said that it killed the beautiful tradition of us - handwriting letter communication. There is something we need to be
clearer
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clear
 here, phone calls, video calls don't make the
hand-writing
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hand-written
handwriting
handwritten
 letter communication method to be
blur
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blurred
 but more outstanding. A
hand-writing
written by hand
handwritten
hand-written
 letter is much more valuable than a phone call or a video call which we do not need much time to create. In conclusion, we need to accept that new
technology
 are pushing our traditions to a higher position than their current levels. Change is not something bad but an essential
items
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item
 for our evolution.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

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