We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways however can new technology help maintain our traditions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experiance.

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Technology

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developping

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

developing

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unstoppable speed which shows in the number and style of items

such

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as computers, laptops, mobile phones, iPads.... There are many people said that new

technology

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is threatening our traditions all over the world.

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, the concern is whether new

technology

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can help maintain our beloved traditions in any way. We must admit that new

technology

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is the good

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

of creativeness. There is a fact that we have many companies, which are in

variety

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varying

sizes and different parts, try to produce new technological items in each

second

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. It might be the commercial require of the international market, it

also

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can be the effort of the scientists. The products aim to be better and better, newer and newer in comparison with the old versions. It means that something old should be

replace

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replaced

by the new one which is improved from the original.

New

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The new technology

technology

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is based on the old

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while the oldest

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root was from the traditions. Thereby, new

technology

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is using and developing from the traditions, even it raises the tradition to reach a new rank in its progress.

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, we used

hand-writing

written by hand

handwritten

hand-written

handwriting

letters to keep in touch before the media means appeared. By the time, phones and computers, iPad were invented along side with the Internet explosion. On the one hand, people feel that it's easier to connect with others, not only our

relatives but

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relatives, but

also

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our friends who we have never met before.

On the other hand

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, some people said that it killed the beautiful tradition of us - handwriting letter communication. There is something we need to be

clearer

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clear

here, phone calls, video calls don't make the

hand-writing

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hand-written

handwriting

handwritten

letter communication method to be

blur

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blurred

but more outstanding. A

hand-writing

written by hand

handwritten

hand-written

letter is much more valuable than a phone call or a video call which we do not need much time to create. In conclusion, we need to accept that new

technology

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are pushing our traditions to a higher position than their current levels. Change is not something bad but an essential

items

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item

for our evolution.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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346 words

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