We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways however can new technology help maintain our traditions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experiance.

Technology
is
developping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
in
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at
a
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an
unstoppable speed which shows in the number and style of items
such
as computers, laptops, mobile phones, iPads.... There are many people said that new
technology
is threatening our traditions all over the world.
However
, the concern is whether new
technology
can help maintain our beloved traditions in any way. We must admit that new
technology
is the good
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
of creativeness. There is a fact that we have many companies, which are in
variety
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varying
sizes and different parts, try to produce new technological items in each
second
. It might be the commercial require of the international market, it
also
can be the effort of the scientists. The products aim to be better and better, newer and newer in comparison with the old versions. It means that something old should be
replace
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replaced
by the new one which is improved from the original.
New
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The new technology
technology
is based on the old
technology
while the oldest
technology
root was from the traditions. Thereby, new
technology
is using and developing from the traditions, even it raises the tradition to reach a new rank in its progress.
For instance
, we used
hand-writing
written by hand
handwritten
hand-written
handwriting
letters to keep in touch before the media means appeared. By the time, phones and computers, iPad were invented along side with the Internet explosion. On the one hand, people feel that it's easier to connect with others, not only our
relatives but
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relatives, but
also
our friends who we have never met before.
On the other hand
, some people said that it killed the beautiful tradition of us - handwriting letter communication. There is something we need to be
clearer
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clear
here, phone calls, video calls don't make the
hand-writing
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hand-written
handwriting
handwritten
letter communication method to be
blur
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blurred
but more outstanding. A
hand-writing
written by hand
handwritten
hand-written
letter is much more valuable than a phone call or a video call which we do not need much time to create. In conclusion, we need to accept that new
technology
are pushing our traditions to a higher position than their current levels. Change is not something bad but an essential
items
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item
for our evolution.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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