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n many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many nations. Many people think that government should be responsible for
this
, while I personally suppose that parents must be the primary duty on children’s overweight. There are several reasons why children are getting unbalanced shapes. The
first
 reason is that children are
allowing
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allowed
 to intake a large amount of unhealthy
food
 on a daily basis. Fast
food
 as an example for containing high amount of fat which can lead to
child’s
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a child’s
 putting-on weight and related diseases. Another reason is that young children often are strongly governed by computer or
technology
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technological
 devices.
Therefore
, they prefer spending hours and hours sticking their eyes on the screens to taking part in outdoor activities.
Consequently
, the calories they consumed are not burned but internal fat tissue which contributes to obese children. Parents have to take a main responsibility for
this
 negative impact.
First
, they should control their offspring’s eating habits. Trying to avoid the unhealthy
food
such
 as fried, pizza or even cut the extra meals.
Additionally
, they
also
 can encourage their children to live a dynamic life. Adult need to be a child’s good partner
on
Suggestion
with
 physical activities, not just tell them verbally.
This
 may help children escape from idle lifestyle. The government
also
 should take measures to eliminate children’s obesity. Enacting strict legislations that preventing
food
 companies from producing unhealthy convenience
food
 as well as advertising them on mass media would
also
 indirectly keeps children away from high-calorie-contained foods. In conclusion,
although
 the government should have responsibility for childhood obesity, each parent of every single family still plays the most important role
on
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in
 orienting their offspring to a healthy life.
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