Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

That choosing subjects or majors in universities is now becoming burning issues, some people believe that students should
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in fields which have bright future prospects for
society
such
as
science
and
technology
.
However
, I would agree with the perspective that learners should be free to choose whatever they are passionate. There are several reasons why University students should be forced to study some key subjects
such
as
science
and
technology
rather than study what they are interested.
Firstly
, at individual levels, Participating in
science
and
technology
areas significantly aid students to seek for
job
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a job
jobs
more easily in the future with higher salary, more job prospects as well as have a higher standard of living.
Secondly
, at
society
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societal
levels,
science
and
technology
are the two major industries which greatly contribute to the prosperity of a nation. In fact, as more people engage
in
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with
these subjects, a country will have a well-educated workforce and have more invention, which leads to economic growth. In spite of these arguments, I believe that University students should be free to pursue their interested areas of study. The
first
reason is that if University learners follow their
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
majors,
society
will have a more solid economic growth. In reality, the development of an
economy
greatly depends on different kinds of industries, not only in high-qualified areas
such
as
science
and
technology
, but
also
other portions
such
as business, service and
arts
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the arts
.
Therefore
, if
society
lacks any pillars, it will have a great impact on the
economy
as a whole.
Secondly
, if the
gorvenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
only concentrates on some main majors, it will result in the imbalance of the
economy
.
For example
, the large number of high-qualified
workforce
Accept comma addition
workforce, such
such
as doctors or nurses will be
abundance
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abundant
in the future will lead to an increase in
unemployed rate
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the unemployed rate
of the
economy
. To sum up,
although
it may seem sensible for Universities to focus mainly on most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current educational system where people can pursue their own interest.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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