Some people say that we should not encourage sport games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with?

Sports enrich student’s campus life and energize their physiques. Notwithstanding, a heated debate
in
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on
whether sports
should be encourage
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should be encouraged
in schools has been
risen
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rising
. I personally disagree with those who remonstrate about athletic events for the youth. It is inevitable that competitive
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
between students would be occurred during sport contests.
However
, contestant’s rivalry in a championship is not significant. Looking at the whole picture, witness of student giving each other affectionate
gestures
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gesture
is
noticeable
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noticing
things that we can encounter. Take my football club
for example
, after each match, friendly handshake or fist bump is what we confer with our rivals. Not only
competition but
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competition, but
cooperation
also arise
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also arises
has also arisen
after athletic games. Sports are applied for generating a unity of contestant, especially in team sports.
Thus
,
method
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the method
a method
methods
of playing harmoniously along with partners could be acquired by students and sports games among schools are
hold
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held
to mainly enhance friendship and mutual understanding. In general, sport games among schools lead to both competition and cooperation and it is undeniably beneficial in terms of both physically and mentally.
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