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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should, therefore, be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is hard to imagine life without technologies nowadays. Technological advances make human’s life better, especially teaching.
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, educators seem to depend too much on computers and it leads to many impacts on students.
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 loophole only can be sold by combining
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 modern and traditional
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systems
. I believe it is really important to be aware of
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 the advantage and disadvantage of devices before applying it. Using technological devices for teaching
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 as computers is very common
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 present. Computers help the teacher to prepare the
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 better than before. Planning the lecture from the computer allows the educator to put in the sounds as well as
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imagined
imagining
. According to students, pictures help them memorize the
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 easier.
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, sound can help the classroom’s environment becomes more interesting and catch student’s attention smoothly. The application of computer already made a big move in the
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.
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, over-dependent on computers can lead to many consequences, especially for students.
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 of giving a balance between traditional and modern teaching
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, educators seem to promote the modern way and only highlight its benefits. The modern technique gives the educators plenty of opportunities to run the
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 without interaction among students.
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, there is a lack of communication and co-operation in the
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system
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 nowadays. In the present, pupils are
shier
lacking self-confidence
shyer
 than before. They afraid to share, to talk in front of the class or always feel nervous every time they do a presentation. There is a need for having
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 traditional and modern
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 nowadays. The old
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 encourages students to communicate as well as more active. Enhance, the friendship among students is better.
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 the other hand, the modern
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 will make the
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 more interesting. Why don’t we combine
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 methods in teaching? In conclusion, computers are taking an important role in modern
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.
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, everything has drawbacks. In my opinion, I expect the educators can aware more about
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the pros
 and cons in using computers as the main device in educating. To me, learning is the most important thing in
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 will be more concerned in the future.
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