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Some people think the government founding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population anf the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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Many people believe that the government should not invest in
act
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activities
 and
culture
 while others think that money can be used for cultural activities because it bring advantage of the population and
culture
. In
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will examine both
agruments
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
arguments
 and
then
 give my personal opinion. On the one hand, some
peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 suppose that
art
 and
culture
 should be supported by the government. Many
form
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forms
 of
art
, especially painting, each
pictures
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picture
 is a meaningful story that painter
want
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wants
 to deliver
massages
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
messages
 about life. Saving ancient pictures is
way
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a way
 that can help people cherish the beauty of
culture
.
For example
, Viet Nam's authority built Ho Chi
minh
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Minh
museum which
Accept comma addition
museum, which
show
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shows
 pictures about Ho Chi Minh's life when he lived. He has a great president.
Therefore
,
art
 and
culture
touch
impart skills or knowledge to
teach
 us to value spirit and contact individual person with
community
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the community
.
On the other hand
, the
others
writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)
authors
 believe that the authority should not spend budget to support
art
 and
culture
. There are more important projects.
For example
,
healthcare
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health care
 and education put on top because
this
factors
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factor
 are directly
impact
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impacting
 on
population
Suggestion
the population
. To be specific, the government could hold free health
examinition
the act of examining something closely (as for mistakes)
examination
examinations
 twice a year for the poor, especially older.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
,
origanizing
create (as an entity)
organizing
organising
 educational events about sex education, educational
eproduction
the act or process of producing something
production
 in the rural areas, which have not modern education system.
This
policies
Suggestion
policy
 will improve population and grow economic of the country. In conclusion, it is
underunderstandable
 why many people think that allocating to cultural activities,
however
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe that the
founding
financial resources provided to make some project possible
funding
 should not be spent for it because there are some necessary issues which need to care of the authority.
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