The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table provides information about the types of functions that were used by mobile
phone
owners across seven categories in three specific years – 2006, 2008 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be observed that the most frequent mobile
phone
usage
was for making calls. It is
also
noticeable that there were no figures provided for searching the Internet and recording video in 2006. In each of these years, the use of mobile phones for calling was significantly higher than the other six functions, with 100%
usage
levels in both 2006 and 2009 and 99% in 2010. The other three features which include photo taking, sending text messages and playing music, all had a slight increase in the percentage of
usage
frequency by
the
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cell
phone
owners.
In contrast
, recording video had the largest rise in
usage
frequency starting with 9% in 2008. By 2010,
this
figure went up
fourth
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fold with 35% of the owners using the
phone
for video recording.
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