the government investments in arts , music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement

Governmental payment varies between paying its money on arts and public services, so there are two
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contradictory
contradictories
arguments. Some people accept that
government
must pay its money in
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public
public's
services only, while others see that
government
should invest
also
in
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the arts
arts
.
This
essay will discuss the different two
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoints
view points
and discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods.
First
, arts and music can teach people to be quiet, calm and how to acquire values from the artists. Teachers in schools must teach children what is the importance of teaching those. Because kids and adults will know the culture of other countries. In Egypt there are a
lot
of examples that illustrate how my country is interesting in music as Omar Khairat
Accept space
,
,
s Orchestra that admires millions of people. There are
also
a
lot
of tourists that come to watch Om Kalthom
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,
,
s and
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Abed
Abd
Elhalim, s parties. Hamlet is
also
an example of arts which is a beautiful art and famous around the world.
Although
there are many advantages of spending a
lot
of money on arts, there are disadvantages that come when the general funds invest in awful arts that will affect the
next
generations. To summarize the
first
point, there are a
lot
of important things to know when the local
government
spend on arts
such
as tasting the beautiful arts and earn
not of long duration; having just (or relatively recently) come into being or been made or acquired or discovered
new
knew
knowledge about other countries.
Second
, local
government
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should also invest
should invest
also
in public services as bridges, fix the old roads and discover new roads. Expending on these methods is huge and enormous. The advantage of investing in roads will decrease the accidents in
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the streets
streets
;
this
will lead
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to passing
to pass
between cities easily.
For example
the time spends when we ride trams is shorter than cars in rush hour. Briefly the
first
and important thing to local
government
is investing in public services. In conclusion, expending on arts and general services are important, but the
government
must increase the weight that
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is expended
is expending
expends
expending
on the
second
approach. So I strongly agree that it must invest in two methods.

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