Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Sollutions to change negative acttitudes?

In the recent years, foreign tourists are increasing in the world and many people suppose that tourists are drawback effects for their country.
This
essay below will outline
reasons
Suggestion
the reasons
and methods to solve
this
issue. On the one hand, international tourism can influence to the environment. To be specific, the large amount of wastes in the peak tourist season come from activities
such
as: camping,
swiming
the act of swimming
swimming
,...
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
sewage and waste water treatment system will overload and not deal all waste.
Therefore
, it can lead to environmental pollution.
For example
, Do Son beach in Viet Nam, water sources are seriously polluted by travel
actions
a variety of bridge in which tricks made in excess of the contract are scored toward game; now generally superseded by contract bridge
auctions
.
This
problem can solve by solutions. The government
shouls
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
have punishments
such
as financial
penaty
with people
relase
release, as from one's grip
released
waste into the environment or water sources.
Moreover
, raising social awareness of
foreign traveler
Suggestion
a foreign traveller
foreign traveller
foreign travellers
foreign travel
by
haging
decoration that is hung (as a tapestry) on a wall or over a window
hanging
having
hugging
banner with protecting the environment content.
On the other hand
, cultural nation can be affected by international tourism.
Forexample
Suggestion
For example
, in Viet Nam's pagodas request wearing neat clothes, people do not shorts, shorts skirts,..
when
Suggestion
When
they go there.
However
, some overseas
traveler
a person who changes location
travellers
do not know
rules
Suggestion
the rules
and they can violate.
This
lead to local people have bad views about tourists. In order to tackle
this
matter, the authority should require
traveler
a person who changes location
travellers
researching information
abot
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
about
countries where they will go and using tourist handbook when they travel. In conclusion, there are some reasons why people think that international tourism is a negative thing and some measures could be taken to address
this
problem.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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