The availability of the Internet has enabled school children to read books and find reference sources online. Libraries no longer have important roles in assisting students with their study as well as entertainment purposes. Do you agree or disagree with the statement above? Write a paragraph of about 200 words to state your opinion.

Today, many believe that the emergence of the Internet has altered the conventional way of studying. In other word, libraries have gradually made room for the Internet
to be
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being
the most universal source of
information
ever. From my own perspective, I strongly accede to the aforementioned
staement
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
. These below illustrations will explain the reason why.
Firstly
, there is no denying that libraries used to be the most common destination for those whose desire is to study, do research, read books to widen range of knowledge, meet and share with others who have
interest
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an interest
interests
in common. Ever since the Internet was invented, people much prefer staying at home and going on the Internet to
spending
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spend
time in libraries for Internet is generally much
convenient
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more convenient
than libraries are. With a smartphone or a laptop, we can effortlessly access the Internet without moving.
Moreover
, the amount of
information
in libraries is definitely less than that on the Internet, so there is no doubt that
Internet
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the Internet
is much
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
. Another equally important thing, in other word, the key factor influencing public's choice between Internet ad libraries is that the time we have to spend on searching for
information
. Walking into a library, we may get lost
admist
declare to be true or admit the existence or reality or truth of
admits
a variety of books. They are cautiously classified and put on countless considerably high
bookshlves
a shelf on which to keep books
bookshelves
that you even
want
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
went
for a ladder to get one on the top. But with the convenience of the Internet, we merely get to type what we want to know in the searching bar, thereupon, many results that are
sone
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
one
shown
of the most suitable for the key words typed appear. Your work is solely choosing one which you think includes needed
information
. The searching process is obviously significantly shorter than that in libraries. In conclusion, we all appreciate what both aforementioned sources of
information
contributed to human knowledge,
however
, the better is the winner. With its convenience, the Internet has
overweighed
overcome, as with emotions or perceptual stimuli
overwhelmed
averaged
overweight
libraries to become the most common one
to
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for
with
students.

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