The availability of the Internet has enabled school children to read books and find reference sources online. Libraries no longer have important roles in assisting students with their study as well as entertainment purposes. Do you agree or disagree with the statement above? Write a paragraph of about 200 words to state your opinion.
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Today, many believe that the emergence of the Internet has altered the conventional way of studying. In other word, libraries have gradually made room for the Internet
to be
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information
ever. From my own perspective, I strongly accede to the aforementioned staement
. These below illustrations will explain the reason why.
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statement
Firstly
, there is no denying that libraries used to be the most common destination for those whose desire is to study, do research, read books to widen range of knowledge, meet and share with others who have interest
in common. Ever since the Internet was invented, people much prefer staying at home and going on the Internet to Suggestion
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interests
spending
time in libraries for Internet is generally much Suggestion
spend
convenient
than libraries are. With a smartphone or a laptop, we can effortlessly access the Internet without moving. Suggestion
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Moreover
, the amount of information
in libraries is definitely less than that on the Internet, so there is no doubt that Internet
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the Internet
prefered
.
Another equally important thing, in other word, the key factor influencing public's choice between Internet ad libraries is that the time we have to spend on searching for more desirable than another
preferred
information
. Walking into a library, we may get lost admist
a variety of books. They are cautiously classified and put on countless considerably high declare to be true or admit the existence or reality or truth of
admits
bookshlves
that you even a shelf on which to keep books
bookshelves
want
for a ladder to get one on the top. But with the convenience of the Internet, we merely get to type what we want to know in the searching bar, thereupon, many results that are change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
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some
one
shown
information
. The searching process is obviously significantly shorter than that in libraries.
In conclusion, we all appreciate what both aforementioned sources of information
contributed to human knowledge, however
, the better is the winner. With its convenience, the Internet has overweighed
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