It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The aging population

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has become a broad issue

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general public.

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trend is predicted to expand in a

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of nations in the future.

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essay would like to examine both advantages and disadvantages of

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phenomenon before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, an increasing

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of older citizens bring about several benefits. One clear merit of

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tendency is that the government's spending on education and training will be saved. The fact is that young people will need fundamental schooling and general training before they can contribute to the development of one nation's economy. The governments are supposed to pay most of

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fee for them. Another bright side of aging

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could be that

unemployment rate

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the unemployment rate

will not be as high as that in young

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countries.

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, the society seems to be stable.

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, the whole society is likely to become an ideal place for their people to reside.

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can be explained by the values they share together as they experience major changes at their time.

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, they will have

better mutual understanding

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a better mutual understanding

, which in turn strengthens the community bonding.

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, there are numerous challenges that one country may deal with. The greatest drawback is that there might be a shortage of young and adaptable employees. As there are a greater

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of older people who will gradually retire,

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

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market will need to provide the substitutions to the sectors in need. The nations without many young workers will face difficulties to solve

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issue. An

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added

problem of

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trend is that a big amount of spending on welfare will be required. To illustrate, elderly citizens demand more

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health care

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

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, residential homes or care homes due to their deteriorating health condition.

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will lead to a high pressure on the government’s funding in those countries. In conclusion, there are both benefits and

down sides

a negative aspect of something that is generally positive

downsides

of aging

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.

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, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages as a

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of issues

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trend derived those countries have to combat.