In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

Artists have long played
irreplaceably
impossible to replace
irreplaceable
crucial roles, which cannot be performed by scientists or technologists. Two
such
roles will be the main concern of
this
essay.
First
and foremost,
arts
Suggestion
the arts
allow us to live in a
world
of imagination, which does not require any evidence at all as in science. When scientists carry out some research, what they try to seek is evidence based on the collection of actual data, without which they cannot prove anything truly meaningful to the
world
.
However
, artists do not have
such
restrictions, so they have so much freedom in depicting an imaginary
world
not only to satisfy their own
needs but
Accept comma addition
needs, but
also
to meet the demand of the general public, including scientists.
For instance
, various works of art,
such
as sci-fi novels or sci-fi films, can help us enjoy the great satisfaction of travelling to faraway galaxies, which is scientifically impossible at the moment, but isn't it a catalyst for certain scientific projects?
In addition
, unlike technologists, artists aim at touching our
heart
Suggestion
hearts
rather than bringing us practical applications in the form of technological equipment. As a matter of course, in
this
modern
world
, we normally need
such
tools as a smart phone, a computer, or a television set to listen to music, but without great musicians or music composers, how could we have access to unforgettable works? It is the inspiration or motivation
from
Suggestion
for
great music that keeps us alive and able to perform our work well on a daily basis, which is undeniable. To recap, there are at least two ways in which scientists and technologists cannot replace artists: thanks to arts, all of us, young and old, can live a fully happy life by developing our sense of imagination and obtaining great sources of inspiration.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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