the percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend

It is true that the

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the quotient obtained when the magnitude of a part is divided by the magnitude of the whole

proportion

of

obesity

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obese

children in Western nations has grown by 20% in the past decade.

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essay will take a

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investigation into the basics of the issue and figure out the

rationable

(law) an explanation of the fundamental reasons (especially an explanation of the working of some device in terms of laws of nature)

rationale

rational

behind it as well as the related repercussions.

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with, the main reason lies in the recognition of the fact that children have

unhealth

not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind

unhealthy

eating habits. They overeat a lot of junk food. Plus, they consume carbonated drink and food, having high calories. Another factor which is worth taking into consideration is

inactivity

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the inactivity

of children. They tend to watch TV and play with computers more than doing exercise. Outside activities of children are

reducing

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reduced

by the habit of inactivity. So, children are becoming overweight.

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but not least, inasmuch as

parients

a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian

parents

patients

work overtime, they have less time for their children. The more

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a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian

parents

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only earn money, the more they

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don't take

aren't taking

care of them carefully. They have fewer nutrient meals, which causes

overdigestion

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of fast foods. When children overeat fast foods which contain enormous calories, should calories not be

burn

brought into existence

born

, it will cause the obesity disease of children. Inevitably,

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a trend

entail

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entails

certain impacts.

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of all, when children absorb huge calories, they have risk of obesity and diabetes disease. What is more, children have

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increased

body fat percentage. They

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are suffering

were suffering

have suffered

have been suffered

were suffered

from high blood pressure and heart disease.

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, overweight children have psychosocial effects. Which means that in a culture where slim people are standard of

beuty

the qualities that give pleasure to the senses

beauty

piety

, it is due to the fact that obese people are being ignored.

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, obese children have fewer opportunities to mix with their peers.

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, people take no notice of overweight

children which

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children, which

causes depression of obese children. To sum up,

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is a taxing problem and tough measures must be taken.