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Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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Celebrity status has both positive and negative aspects
in
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of
 people’s lives.
This
 essay believes that the advantages of being famous outweigh the disadvantages, as celebrities have
access
 to VIP events and have great financial rewards.
However
, they
also
 have a lack of privacy that will be
also
 discussed in
this
 essay. Celebrities around the world have
access
 to premier events, which are just for few important people that have
access
 to.
This
 is due to they are known and they will attract the media attention, bringing benefits for both companies and artists. Take the Golden Globe as
a
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an
 example;
only people
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the only people
 that were invited have
access
 to the red carpet.
In addition
, famous personalities receive high payments that allow them to live a comfortable life with their families.
For instance
,
Super Bowl
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a Super Bowl
the Super Bowl
 in the USA every year choose a celebrity to perform
at
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on
 their stage during the game break and they pay thousand of dollars for
this
 presentation.
However
, being famous have some drawbacks and the major
complain
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complaint
 is about the lack of privacy. Many artists have to deal with Paparazzi in their day-to-day lives, since they follow them everywhere in order to have breaking news. The TV program E!, has many journalists following celebrities everyday to take a picture or recording a video of their private moments to publish in the gossip magazines. In conclusion, even though celebrities have to be aware that their lives can be exposed by the Paparazzi, the benefits of being famous far outweigh the negative aspects, since they are very well compensate with high salaries and
access
 to events that can make them even more famous.
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