In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Traffic is always a pressing
problem
of the countries in every age. Some governments was lodged a method to solve
this
problem
, which is
increase
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increasing
money
for
tax
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taxes
a tax
on
car
drivers and use
this
to improve public transport.
However
,
this
solution has some advantages and disadvantages. The
first
advantages of
this
solution
is
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are
an among of cars on the streets would decrease. Because
money
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the money
they have to pay very expensive, when they drive
owners
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the owners car
car
, they have to pay
toll
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tolls
,
tax
, petrol or diesel... So, traffic
problem
and pollution
would be reduce
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would be reduced
.
Next
, when people do not drive owners
car
and public transportation more and more improve, they would go
by
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with
it everywhere. Because, it is very cheap and
enviromentaly
for the environment
environmentally
friendly. And when public transport
achive
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achieves
achieve
convinience
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
convenience
enough for people go, they would travel
by
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with
it. But,
this
method exists some disadvantages.
Such
as, at
first
time, when public transport
improve
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improves
no more and
tax
heavy surpass ability, they have to try
by
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with
it to go to work and they could be late or walk very far. And, the
number
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amount
of
money
, which government
earn
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earns
by
tax
, toll...
would
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Would
less than before because people do not buy
car
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a car
the car
,
then
the company do not produce to sell, so
money
earn
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earns
less. In conclusion, to use method to solve
traffic
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the traffic problem
a traffic problem
problem
is
possible but
Accept comma addition
possible, but
we need much time, and in that time, some disadvantages is always parallel with advantages.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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