In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Traffic is always a pressing
problem
of the countries in every age. Some governments was lodged a method to solve
this
problem
, which is
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increasing
increase
money
for
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taxes
a tax
tax
on
car
drivers and use
this
to improve public transport.
However
,
this
solution has some advantages and disadvantages. The
first
advantages of
this
solution
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are
is
an among of cars on the streets would decrease. Because
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the money
money
they have to pay very expensive, when they drive
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the owners car
owners
car
, they have to pay
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tolls
toll
,
tax
, petrol or diesel... So, traffic
problem
and pollution
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would be reduced
would be reduce
.
Next
, when people do not drive owners
car
and public transportation more and more improve, they would go
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with
by
it everywhere. Because, it is very cheap and
for the environment
environmentally
enviromentaly
friendly. And when public transport
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achieves
achieve
achive
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
convenience
convinience
enough for people go, they would travel
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with
by
it. But,
this
method exists some disadvantages.
Such
as, at
first
time, when public transport
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improves
improve
no more and
tax
heavy surpass ability, they have to try
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with
by
it to go to work and they could be late or walk very far. And, the
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amount
number
of
money
, which government
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earns
earn
by
tax
, toll...
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Would
would
less than before because people do not buy
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a car
the car
car
,
then
the company do not produce to sell, so
money
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earns
earn
less. In conclusion, to use method to solve
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the traffic problem
a traffic problem
traffic
problem
is
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possible, but
possible but
we need much time, and in that time, some disadvantages is always parallel with advantages.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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