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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Anything that cannot make any use of it, can be identified as
rubbish
. If we look at decades of years back, people did not dump
rubbish
 like now. Now the companies are more engaged with producing
rubbish
 than producing something useful. Nowadays the
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 of the human being has changed, and everyone is running after money and profits only.
At
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In
 that case they have
forgot
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forgotten
 their duties and
responsiilities
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
 towards the society. The main reason for producing
rubbish
 is that everyone wants to be successful by doing anything at any cost. Even if we look at the food we eat, most of them have been produced by adding various chemicals for preservation, tasty and for a greater look. And
this
 food is
wraped
covered with or as if with clothes or a wrap or cloak
wrapped
reaped
warped
 from a plastic cover which can be identified as the main source of
rubbish
to
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in
 the world. Since
this
 problem
is getting
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gets
 worse day by day, the government has to interfere
for
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in
this
 issue and should provide a solution in order to stop the damage that
this
 would
to
engage in
do
 to the world. The authorities must impose taxes on
such
 products and
also
 should introduce new rules and regulations for the producers. Not only that, the rulers must charge an enormous
penalties
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penalty
, fines and charges from the people who break these formalities.
This
 will make organizations to think
further
 before producing
rubbish
 because no one like to pay fines or to be in a jail for the blame of producing not quality standard food. In conclusion, not only the manufacturers, but
also
general public
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the general public
 like all of us must pay attention on
this
 disaster, and should support to save our world for future generations.
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