The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status

The chart illustrates the number of hours spent per
week
on
leisure
time
by men and women of various employment categories in 1998-99. Overall, men spent more hours on
leisure
activities than women did in the period given. Both genders were most available
to
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for
free
time
in the unemployed and retired status while the least accessible to have a rest were employed full
time
people.
Furthermore
, there were no data given for men in
employed
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employing
part
time
bracket and housewives respectively. In terms of
unemployed and retired group
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the unemployed and retired group
, men spent about 85 hours per
week
enjoying
leisure
time
as opposed to women at around 75 hours. As for employed full
time
men and women comparably on
leisure
hours, men accounted for almost 50 hours per
week
, which is 10 hours more than for women.
Similarly
, employed part
time
women spent less hours
on
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of
leisure
time
about 40 per
week
in a comparison to almost 50 hours of housewives.

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