The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Now days
pollution
is a major problem causing major problems like global warming, depletion of ozone layer etc. The major reason for
this
pollution
are the automobiles. Cars though have made transportation
easier but
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easier, but
it comes with
lot
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lots
a lot
of many disadvantages.
Its
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It's
been so many years since the launch of
first
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the first car
car
, but as time went by the number of cars on
road
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the road
started increasing
in
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at
an alarming rate. In a recent
survey it
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survey, it
was found that
pollution
from cars contribute one fourth of entire
pollution
. The usage of
car
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a car
is
also
not efficient,
car
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the car
cars
being made to carry 4 to 5
people but
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people, but
instead
most of the time a single individual
drives
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drive
it which causes huge traffic and slows down
transport
. It is not just by
exhaust
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the exhaust
that
car
pollutes, there are air conditioners fitted in cars which causes depletion of
ozone layer
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the ozone layer
. The coolant used in cars for AC's is the cause
for
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of
ozone layer depletion. There are
couple
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a couple
of ways through which
this
can be avoided,
such
as public
transport
should be easily accessible and made convenient. People prefer cars as a mode of
transport
because the public
transport
is not good and not properly maintained
.
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.
Public
transport
such
as metros, rails, buses should be more in number and should allow
limited number
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a limited number
of passengers to maintain comfort. Another reason is the fares of
this
transport
, which can be lowered.
Car
pooling should be introduced, so no
car
goes empty and needy passenger can get lifts. People prefer using apps these
days which
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days, which
will make
car
pooling easy
and and
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and
effective way to efficiently use cars.

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