We have been living in the nuclear age now for Ove half a century. since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

In these days, nuclear power has been

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popular, particularly

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developed countries

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the developed countries

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a half century

, it

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still has

negative aspects in

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technology

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essay will discuss how danger the nuclear

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is and

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the advantages

and disadvantages of it. Whether the nuclear

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is dangerous or not depend on how people

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. It might be used for evil

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there might be many ways to utilize it safely. One example of safe

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of nuclear

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in the real world is that using it for

energy

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source. It could supply electricity for a tremendous number of houses and emit less carbon dioxide than other

energy

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sources. Meanwhile, in fact, it could be weapons

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as atomic bombs that absolutely terminate lives in

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specific areas

a specific area

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the bomb

is dropped. In short, nuclear

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could be safe for every life on Earth if it is managed and used properly. The main benefit of nuclear

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is its efficiency. It can generate a large amount of

energy

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with few sources. Especially in France,

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, 95% of electricity is covered by nuclear

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.

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, it might be a threat to the life on Earth. Nuclear could be

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bombed

and missile.

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, in WW2 in 1945, it had been used for evil

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in Japan. At that time, more than hundred thousand of people had been dead due to

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the atomic bombs

. Overall, nuclear

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could be both beneficial and

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threats

to the people in the world. The people need to restrict it and

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only for

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an advantageous way

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to save life on Earth.