We have been living in the nuclear age now for Ove half a century. since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

In these days, nuclear power has been
popular particularly
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popular, particularly
in many of
developed countries
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the developed countries
. While it has helped people for
half century
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a half century
, it
has still had
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still has
negative aspects in
use
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the use
of
this
technology
.
This
essay will discuss how danger the nuclear
technology
is and
advantages
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the advantages
and disadvantages of it. Whether the nuclear
technology
is dangerous or not depend on how people
use
. It might be used for evil
way
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way, however
however
there might be many ways to utilize it safely. One example of safe
way
of nuclear
use
in the real world is that using it for
energy
source. It could supply electricity for a tremendous number of houses and emit less carbon dioxide than other
energy
sources. Meanwhile, in fact, it could be weapons
such
as atomic bombs that absolutely terminate lives in
specific area
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specific areas
a specific area
where
bomb
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the bomb
is dropped. In short, nuclear
technology
could be safe for every life on Earth if it is managed and used properly. The main benefit of nuclear
technology
is its efficiency. It can generate a large amount of
energy
with few sources. Especially in France,
for example
, 95% of electricity is covered by nuclear
energy
.
However
, it might be a threat to the life on Earth. Nuclear could be
bomb
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bombed
and missile.
For example
, in WW2 in 1945, it had been used for evil
way
in Japan. At that time, more than hundred thousand of people had been dead due to
atomic bombs
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the atomic bombs
. Overall, nuclear
technology
could be both beneficial and
threat
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threats
to the people in the world. The people need to restrict it and
use
only for
advantageous
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an advantageous way
way
to save life on Earth.
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