Some people think the government should be responsible for solving the pollution problem which results from heavy traffic. To what extent you agree?

Nowadays, most countries around the world are facing
increasing
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an increasing pollution problem
increasing pollution problems
pollution
problem which results from increased traffic in big cities. It is often argued that only the government is responsible to found solutions to minimise
pollution problem
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the pollution problem
pollution problems
.
Although
I agree that
governments
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government's
responsibility plays a crucial role, I think every person is accountable and should
do
engage in
make
efforts each other to solve
this
problem.
Firstly
, overpopulation is the main reason for increasing
pollution
. As a consequence, peoples have old cheap cars they use them to move to different places.
Besides
, public transport is too expensive and less convenient than private vehicles.
In addition
, governments not giving rebates for people
witch
expresses the means used
with
bought ecology friendly vehicles
such
as electric or hybrids.
Moreover
,
this
is
governments responsibility
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the governments responsibility
to update infrastructure to make them
more ecology
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more ecologically
friendly
such
as build new bike tracks, easy access to
charging station
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charging stations
for electric cars,
reduction
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reduced
tickets
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ticket
price for public transports, changing petrol or diesel public buses to electric. Governments should allocate a large part of its budget on public transportation and eco-friendly infrastructure in cities. From the other side, we have 20000 new motor cars which coming on roads every day. Recent market research shows as a standard family
have
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has
more vehicles than drivers.
In addition
, cars are usually more than ten years old
also
have a big co2 emission, and people don't care about that. Apart from
this
, people don't like to use public transports or bikes because they
not have
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don't have
time or are too lazy.
Hence
, that's not possible to prevent
pollution
without peoples helps. To conclude, though I agree that the government is responsible and should find a way to eliminate
pollution
problems, I think that people are
also
partially responsible.
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