Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give you opionion.

Few people think that brilliance comes naturally while

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through learning. From my

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of view,

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needs to have

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inborn and only

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can they improve through learning. A section of our society

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that brilliance is innate.

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can be related to an example of

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full of students with different levels of

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. To some students math comes naturally and

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they consider it easy. While few students face a hard time in solving basic math problems because it is not something that comes naturally to them. And

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does not limit to scientific subjects. Many examples in the artistic field support

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as Leonardo Da Vinci was considered a born-natural painter. Improving

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through learning is something that

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of the community agrees with. Just having an intelligent brain is not going to produce extreme results. Only through learning can

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understand every aspect of a topic. The same example of students taken in the previous paragraph can help us understand

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students whom math comes naturally will not have knowledge of a

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Pythagorean

theorem unless they learn it. A scientist can prove

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as they are required to learn and understand the basics and the exceptions to make a new invention. According to me, having an innate brilliance, being in any field of life, is a basic need. Unless doing something that

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is natural at, he/she will not able to provide expected results. I draw my conclusion by looking at people who are unhappy and unsatisfied with their jobs because it is not inborn

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them. In conclusion, people who think having a great mind helps

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being intelligent and people who feel that

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can be improved via learning make points which are to be considered inclusively as without

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, the rest would not come to be true.