Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give you opionion.

Few people think that brilliance comes naturally while
rest
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the rest
of the people contradict by stating that we can improve our
intelligence
through learning. From my
point
of view,
one
needs to have
intelligence
inborn and only
then
can they improve through learning. A section of our society
argue
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argues
that brilliance is innate.
This
can be related to an example of
class
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a class
full of students with different levels of
intelligence
. To some students math comes naturally and
hence
they consider it easy. While few students face a hard time in solving basic math problems because it is not something that comes naturally to them. And
this
does not limit to scientific subjects. Many examples in the artistic field support
this
point
such
as Leonardo Da Vinci was considered a born-natural painter. Improving
one
's
intelligence
through learning is something that
rest
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the rest
of the community agrees with. Just having an intelligent brain is not going to produce extreme results. Only through learning can
one
understand every aspect of a topic. The same example of students taken in the previous paragraph can help us understand
this
point
.
To
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Two
students whom math comes naturally will not have knowledge of a
Pythagoras
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Pythagorean
theorem unless they learn it. A scientist can prove
be
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to be
a great example for
this
point
as they are required to learn and understand the basics and the exceptions to make a new invention. According to me, having an innate brilliance, being in any field of life, is a basic need. Unless doing something that
one
is natural at, he/she will not able to provide expected results. I draw my conclusion by looking at people who are unhappy and unsatisfied with their jobs because it is not inborn
for
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in
them. In conclusion, people who think having a great mind helps
in
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with
being intelligent and people who feel that
intelligence
can be improved via learning make points which are to be considered inclusively as without
one
point
, the rest would not come to be true.

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