Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give you opionion.

Few people think that brilliance comes naturally while

rest

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the rest

of the people contradict by stating that we can improve our

intelligence

through learning. From my

point

of view,

one

needs to have

intelligence

inborn and only

then

can they improve through learning. A section of our society

argue

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argues

that brilliance is innate.

This

can be related to an example of

class

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a class

full of students with different levels of

intelligence

. To some students math comes naturally and

hence

they consider it easy. While few students face a hard time in solving basic math problems because it is not something that comes naturally to them. And

this

does not limit to scientific subjects. Many examples in the artistic field support

this

point

such

as Leonardo Da Vinci was considered a born-natural painter. Improving

one

's

intelligence

through learning is something that

rest

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the rest

of the community agrees with. Just having an intelligent brain is not going to produce extreme results. Only through learning can

one

understand every aspect of a topic. The same example of students taken in the previous paragraph can help us understand

this

point

.

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Two

students whom math comes naturally will not have knowledge of a

Pythagoras

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Pythagorean

theorem unless they learn it. A scientist can prove

be

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to be

a great example for

this

point

as they are required to learn and understand the basics and the exceptions to make a new invention. According to me, having an innate brilliance, being in any field of life, is a basic need. Unless doing something that

one

is natural at, he/she will not able to provide expected results. I draw my conclusion by looking at people who are unhappy and unsatisfied with their jobs because it is not inborn

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in

them. In conclusion, people who think having a great mind helps

in

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with

being intelligent and people who feel that

intelligence

can be improved via learning make points which are to be considered inclusively as without

one

point

, the rest would not come to be true.