The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

Getting married is the most beautiful thing in
this
life! Nowadays, the gay wedding seems to be normal in most of the country, but people still have lots of question marks for
this
phenomenon. Some people afraid that gay
marriage
can cause plenty of drawbacks for society.
However
, there is another group thinks it is
right
to let gays get married. In my opinion, gay
marriage
should be legal and people should have a positive view with gays. I do believe that there is no barrier exist in love. As we all know, having a gay wedding in the 21st century is not a strange thing. Homosexual people are being treated better and equally. Gladly, they do not afraid of society like before and they have a
right
to fight for themselves. For a long time, not only
gays community but
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the gay community, but
the gay community but
gay community but
also
other genders
were asking
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was asking
for legalization of gay
marriage
. In fact,
this
law does not approve of around the world. Why is it so?
First
of all, people still afraid of the drawbacks that gay
marriage
can cause. Some parents do not discriminate the gays, but they afraid their children will look the homosexual like a trend and follow it. It is truly happening in most of the
Asia
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Asian
countries, the place that everyone thinks the goal of the
marriage
is producing the new generation.
In addition
, the previous generation still cannot accept gays and think that
this
is a negative development.
However
, society still has another group which supports and thinks that gays get married is
right
. Gays are like other females and males, they
also
deserve to have a happy ending and a great family. It is called gender equality. No one says that the definition of ‘’
marry
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marries
’’ is to have kids, or it has to be done by men and women. People still have a happy family without children even the normal couple. Humans should have positive views
for
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of
from
them because they have been trying so hard for many years to prove to the world that gays
also
have a
right
to live, love and to be loved. Homosexual people are not able to choose their gender and they deserve to have a legal gay
marriage
law. I have a gay friend and I know it is hard to live as gay. It would not be a negative development if humans have positive thinking and feeling. In conclusion, I do believe all the genders are having a
right
to love. I hope that gay
marriage
will be approved over the world in the future. Love has no
right
or wrong and it depends on your feeling.

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