'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting? You should write at least 250 words. Allow yourself 40 minutes for this task.

Telecommuting is becoming more common in developed countries and from them it is spreading to less developed countries. The telecommuting has a good effect on society. One of the main benefits is that parents will have more time
spending
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spent
with their chance to do their
work
without leaving
comfort
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the comfort
of their house.
Also
workers will not require to go to
work
which
is I think
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am I thinking
is I think
every employee dream. It
also
has own advantages for companies. It takes out necessity
from
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for
companies to build comfortable
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
for workers and reduces amount of worker’s transportation financing. As it’s disadvantage I could say that telecommuting is not good for jobs where the worker’s presence is required. But maybe
this
disadvantage could be fixed.
Personally I
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Personally, I
can’t think of any important disadvantages. If telecommuting continues spreading it will require changes in structure and urban planning.
For example
, office buildings would be smaller because there will be no need for rooms for workers. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
should say telecommuting
have
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has
good impact on society. It’ll give worker enough time to do their job and enjoy their spare time with their family, joining extra activities, hobbies and so on. It’ll
also
reduce
work
stress and increases productiveness of their
work
. Telecommuting will not change only our
work
style but our lifestyle too

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