In order to restrict ever increasing crime rate a class of people ponder that their has to be predefined punishment based on nature of crime whereas other opine that circumstances of crime should be taken into account while deciding the punishment .Both views are discussed below before reaching to valid conclusion .

Fixing the
punishment
by looking just at type of
crime
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makes the decision making process very quick. As without wasting much time on investigating the
situation
of
crime
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it is actually the type of
crime
which decides
punishment
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the punishment
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Furthermore
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by regularizing
punishment fear
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punishment, fear
of
law
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the law
is inculcated among all categories of criminals
that is
small or brutal ones.
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Saudi Arab follows the policy of fixed sentencing. The law of country punishes the culprit of stealing an apple same as
one
stealing a car
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As a result
of
this
Saudi Arab always tops the list of countries with low
crime
rate
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In admittedly
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the
situation
in which a
crime
is committed plays a crucial role in judging the mindset of person committing
crime
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Thus
judgment made after taking into consideration the circumstances often believe to be
fair
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a fair one
one
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contrary
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Contrary
to mandatory
punishment
the idea of flexible
punishment
help preventing the
situation
triggered culprits from facing a furious
punishment
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it is not judicial of imposing
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the same punishment
punishment
to juvenile culprit as to
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an adult
one
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flexible sentencing is more humane and righteous
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the circumstances while a felony occurs regulates the occurrence of
crime
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the sentencing should never be based on type of
crime
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although
all criminals are to be treated equal in the eye of
law even
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law, even
though the judgment process should be active
one
(with
situation regulating intensity
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the situation regulating intensity
a situation regulating intensity
of
punishment
) rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
passive
one
(with
prefixed set
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a prefixed set
of rules deciding
punishment
)
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