Many people believe that education and high qualifications will bring success. Others think that it’s not required to achieve success in life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
speedily growing world, there is a different opinion on the achieved
success
. The number of folks who say that the
education
, as well as deeply qualification, are both important for the gaining
success
, while others society
say
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says
that it is not important to get
success
. I
discuss
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have discussed
both sides before reaching my opinion, in
ensuing paragraphs
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the ensuing paragraphs
. There is a plenty reason of why community
believe
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believes
that the intelligent person can get more
success
in early
life
, one can go to the list.
First
of all, nowadays,
education
is one type of key for solving the most of
problem
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the problem
and achieved a good result.
In other words
, if humans are educated, that’s why they can ameliorate any difficult issue in their
life
, and they can get great
success
.
For example
, the recent survey from the United States, the researcher says that in around the world, the most of successful person got easily
success
in their
life
from their better
education
as well as their advance qualification.
Thus
, the study is most important for all
kind
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kinds
of community. On the other hands, some people say that without any type of
education
, humans got
success
. If people are interested in playing
sport
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sports
and they like to get
success
in
this
filed
catch or pick up (balls) in baseball or cricket
field
, that time
education
is invaluable.
For example
, the world faster runner who name is
usain
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Usain
bolt, he was studded only 4 standards, but
this
day all
kind
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kinds
know him. Agglomerating, all the points elaborated above, it can be concluded that without any type of
success
, the people live on earth is not important in the early day. In my opinion, an intelligent person plays a crucial role in getting a
success
; it is most important in all human
life
.
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