With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?

A mode to transfer information to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
and by sayings or writing or any other
was
structure consisting of a sloping way down to the water from the place where ships are built or repaired
ways
is called as communication which has been there since the beginning of mankind. Now-a-days with growing technology, one can sit in a room and get connected to many
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
through an invisible network called internet and is growing enormously. Anyone can establish a link to social media sites with the help of a single click and these provides the best platform. Some of the greatest and most widely opted ones are Facebook, Twitter,
snapchat
an informal photograph; usually made with a small hand-held camera
snapshot
snapshots
, WhatsApp etc. People from a remote location can
also
make friends from cities sitting alone
at
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in
backyard
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the backyard
a backyard
. The major advantages are that there is no location barrier, no time barrier and no language barrier or
in other words
it is flexible. The best examples
is
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are
when
Ryan Jon
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Ryan, Jon
from London found his biological father on Facebook.
This
was the finest
example which
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example, which
implies that online communication establishment is effectively great. But with all these advantages and advancement, there is a cost associated
to
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with
it which I personally believe is too big. Staying connected virtually is making humans less emotionally connected.
For example
now-a-days children make friends through
there
of them or themselves
their
gadget and not from
playground
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the playground
. There was a time in
past
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the past
a past
when people were more eager to meet new friends in person which used to strengthen the bond and is lacking the most now-a-days. The
dept
the extent downward or backward or inward
depth
depot
debt
is fading away. In my opinion, there should be a balance of online and offline communication which help us to grow
maturely
as might be expected
naturally
.

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